Still: fruit--orange

[jacky liu]

02:)

[HieSpike]

VERY Beautiful render!!! I love it.

Only one thing. The two halves of the orange have the exact same texture which makes it look fake.

Maybe just put one half or use a mirror image if the other half is actually the other half of that orange.

If you fix that I would like a render to put on my desktop.

peace,
Kane
:buttrock:

[Frank Dodd]

Very nice picture, well done. I love the natural irregularity in the oranges shapes but obviously it is the scene setting and lighting that makes the scene come to life. I think the cut orange should probably look a little more 'wet' and the skin looks very thin too ( or perhaps thats just the dodgy oranges I have been eating :) )

[Rice ManX]

the oranges skin looks a little "noisy" (maybe too much spec map?) the glass also looks pretty good, but i think its too thick. but this is really awesome. good work.

[igor popovic]

I love the mood, due to lighting!

i have two minor problems, the first is to add a displacement or some sort of a rough texture to the sliced orages. I found the flat surface too fake, have litle bits of orange here and there, i hope you understand. The second thing is more of an esthetic critique, i think you should set up the scene a bit differently, the scene isn't balanced, in my opinion. All pretty minor details, so keep up the otherwise great work!

igor

[FerdiWillemse]

aaah.... nothing can beat a fR render :buttrock:

[Laptop]

really great work men !!!:bounce:

[Jabo]

Nice.

One thing that bugs me though. The oranges aren't lit bright enough, so they rather tend to look brown instead of a fresh, wet orange color. It's rather well done on the glass, but I'd turn the whole light-direction so that the viewer's side is lit. In spite of the change that would be caused by that, the composition would also need a little contrast. The glass is a contrast, but try to replace the halved orange in the middle with a quartered one that let's lots of light through it's pulp. This way, the needed transparency (=fresh look) would really bring the contrast you need and let the solid oranges be a little more fruity and juicy.

Gah damn, I need a glass of freshly squeezed orange juice now, thanks man!

[nose]

This looks really good. Great work!

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