character: female head

[DDrake]

uhh, she looks coool :D the ear is a bit strange :D And maybe, the mouth is a bit big... but it is hard to see in that view.

Could you please post some side/front views?

btw, i´m modelling a head too. Could you please post your reference photos? Sorry if i´m asking too much :D

[ray]

here are the reference pics:

http://www.hereinmyhead.com/bigpic/slg/spin1001c.jpg
(it's tori amos -> just for the lips)

http://www.hollywoodjesus.com/movie/lotr_fellowship/42.jpg
(cate blanchett, for the rest of the head)

for the profile:
http://www.msnbc.com/news/1291286.jpg

and this one...

http://www.bwgreyscale.com/bwgsimage1/bwgs163_cate_blanchett.JPG


front/side views will take a while to render.. will post em tomorrow.. must go to bed now!

[ray]

ok, here's the front/side view

Thanks for any critiques!

[gnarlycranium]

Dood, that's looking great! She's got tons of personality-- it's nice to see somebody that's not some pseudo-anime bland chick, for once.

I can only pick out three problems in the whole thing.

Her eyelashes don't look natural... but those are a pain, and I don't know anything about hair plugins, so I'm not sure what the problem is there.
The little tab-thingus in the middle of her ear sticks out too far from her head it should start flush with the rest of her face, and just poke out a little tiny bit.
The main, glaring problem I'm seeing is that her profile is tipped back. The foremost part of her brow should about line up with the foremost part of her chin. Right now her brow is too flat, and her chin is too far forward. Fix that and she'll look a lot better, I think.

[luigi]

teh face is going in a good direction.

But the mandibule is to square for be a woman mandibule.
make more thin in the back area.

dont make the eyelashes since you have finished the head.
Because the disturbe to see is the eyes area is welldone.

continue :wip:

the face is going very well

[ray]

some updates. I hope it hasn't become worse than before
:wavey:thanks

[Joel Hooks]

I'd like to see a wire.

Aside from that hideous specular highlite, I think it looks really nice. I like the nose quite a bit.

[DDrake]

the lower eyelash shouldn´t be as big as the upper one.
The lower lip maybe is too big?

it is turning very good :D

[ray]

thanks!!

sorry for repling so late,

here is a wireframe from the head:

http://www.claus-figuren.de/bb/junk.jpg

[Terminator]

with some texture and a hair this model could become a model :applause:

[knifejuggler]

To me, the corners of the mouth look a little deep, kinda like she's chewing the inside of her lips. The ear still looks a little odd from the last view, and the section between her eye & eyebrow looks a little puffy.

just my tuppenceworth.

Nice model though :bounce:

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