WIP: Pinup Model

[Kickflipkid687]

Looks pretty good so far, nice flowing lines and smooth form. Keep it up!

[SheblomCG]

Kickflipkid687: Thanks man! Will keep the work coming!
Updates:
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/7964/persp2qi.jpg
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/1011/persp23di.jpg
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/5493/front8ys.jpg
Wires:
http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/3773/perspwire6yl.jpg
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/8352/frontwire2kz.jpg
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/6357/sidewire2tk.jpg

[theguffman]

I love the lines as well, only thing that I'm not sure about is the amount of muscle in the stomach, especially the one going straight down the middle

I like definition, just is a bit muc for me

[Vertrucio]

Women have a fat pad around the belly button and stomach that smooths out everything in the area. This is true even for very skinny or fit women. Only female athletes and body builders really differ from this.

[SheblomCG]

Hey guys
Thanks for all the comments, i will get to doing the changes soon. But in the mean time here is a small update. Just the beggining of the arms and blockin of the legs:
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/586/body5gx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img439.imageshack.us/img439/8707/arm4cd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/9157/back2cb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2323/wirefront9pk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/3015/wirepersp6rh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img416.imageshack.us/img416/4802/wireback0yo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[SheblomCG]

Hey guys
I have been a lazy bastard this wek and havnt done that much work on her =[
Here is a small update, just been workin on the arm, Please tell me what you think:
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/9056/render5bp.jpg
http://img351.imageshack.us/img351/7351/render21kc.jpg

http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/851/persp18ao.jpg
http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/9593/persp27aj.jpg
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/9729/wiretop1fq.jpg

[SheblomCG]

Heys guys
No new comments? Please comment, i want to make this model awsome! I have just started the head, only like an hour or two but here it is! And if anyone has some good wires of the corners of the eyes, could you please post them up?
Sheblom
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8782/eyes2hg.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/7291/perspwireeye0gt.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/4125/frontwireeye4du.jpg

[SheblomCG]

Hey guys
Sorry it took so long to update! Just been workin as a caisual at a bookshop to pay the bills, so i havnt had much time to work on my 3D! But here are some updates, been workin on the face and been battling with the nose! But i finally [i think] i got it down, so i started the mouth but it still in the beginning stages! So here are the updates:
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9532/facepersp01gw8.jpg
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4091/facepersp02yg0.jpg
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4298/facewirepersply2.jpg
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/3370/facewirefrontjr7.jpg
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4464/facewiresidesi2.jpg

[SheblomCG]

No comments anyone? oh well
Here are some updates, just trying to improve on the stomach. Please tell me whatt u think!
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/6751/frontstomachwireno8.jpg
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1607/frontwebfm9.jpg

[Sifer]

Sheblom13, this coming along nicely. The female form has to be the most complex. Keep it up it bro, it's looking solid.

[SheblomCG]

Thanks alot man! The more crits the better! I will be updating soon! Thanks

[SheblomCG]

Updates:
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2558/face01uk1.jpg
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/1800/face02tu9.jpg
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/4682/face03nz3.jpg

Wires:
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6402/wirepersplg1.jpg
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7527/wirefrontfb6.jpg
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2891/wiresideoi2.jpg

[pap87]

Looking at the side view I can say the mouth and chin especially need to come forward some more.
The body looks great.

[SheblomCG]

pap87: Thanks alot man! i only saw your comment now, so i will work on the chin and mouth, and bring them forward! thans alot man!

Some updates:
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/2613/facefrontao0.jpg
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/8708/facepespss8.jpg

Wires:
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/1549/facewireperspxu4.jpg
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/3791/facewirefrontzj7.jpg
http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/2602/facewiresidedx5.jpg

[Keith Young]

Looking good... but your proportions seem to be off a bit (navel should be higher on a female, and her upper chest seems too short).

http://www.skinprops.com/images/shelb_props.gif

[Digiegg]

hey man, good model but like keith mentioned, proportion seems a bit off.
That's some great reference Keith, can you send me the image without the overlapping picture?

I like the steps you're showing of the face. Never done polygon so it's a great thing for me to look at for workflow =)
Let's see this model go somewhere!

[Keith Young]

It's from a very old Andrew Loomis book. I found it on the original 3d.sk site, but I'm not sure if it's still available there...

http://www.skinprops.com/images/female_dimensions.gif

[SheblomCG]

Hey thanks Guys for the crits!
Keith Young: Thanks alot man! Its wierd man, cause i am useing a actual woman for ref, and thats how she is proportioned! I am going to uplaod the refs with the body pics so you can see what i mean! What i most prob do, is do one body with the ref you provided and another with the ref that i am already using, and from thier choose! But thanks alot for the help man1 It much appreciated! And anymore crits u have please tell me bout them!
Digiegg: Thanks alot man! I am having a look at the proportions now! And no problems bout the face man! It all good!
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7004/frontrefdo0.jpg
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8996/frontrefbodybl5.jpg
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/6425/siderefhp0.jpg
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/1251/siderefbodyze6.jpg

[SheblomCG]

Here are some updates of the face. It still rough, and the ear is still a work in progress, so there is a lot of work still to be done on it! But crits will be appreciated!
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6938/headperspjz1.jpg
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3149/headpersp2zg6.jpg

Wires:
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/504/perspwirerc6.jpg
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/4443/frontwirecb0.jpg
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/1028/sidewiretc0.jpg

[Keith Young]

I guess I might as well post this reference (also from Andrew Loomis drawing book) as well...

http://www.skinprops.com/images/page127.jpg

...note the position of the ears, relative to the centerline of the eyes and the bottom of the nose.

[unknowngod430]

body lkooks great. the face looks more like a man to me. the chin needs to be narrower, and the face overall looks likeit has too much fat compared to the body..

Keep up the good work though

[Laconic]

Figured this might be of some use to the discussion

Interprete as you will

*Beware of nudity*
http://www.female-anatomy-for-artist.com/free/loomis_front.jpg

[pap87]

I still reckon you gotta push the chin out forward a bit so it's even with the lips in the side view. The expression of the girl in your ref is not neutral, like she's biting her lips or something. Look at the reference Keith gave for the side view, that's much better.

Don't copy exactly just as a guide.

[SheblomCG]

Hey Guys
Thanks for all the comments! Sorry it been so long since i have done an update! Been damn busy at work, havnt had a free moment to myself, and by the time i get home i am so tired of computers!! But last night i pulled my finger and did a little work on the vixen, this only bout 2 hours worth of work! Still not happy with the arm, going to remodel it! Work on the face a lil, the proportions are still a lil off! But any crits welcome! Here are some pics:
Renders:
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/412/persprenderpl1.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2585/perspcloseuprenderup3.jpg
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8386/frontrenderdw0.jpg
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8388/siderenderov2.jpg

Wires:
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3831/perspcloseupwireqr7.jpg
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4595/perspwirere8.jpg
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/750/frontwireeg4.jpg
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3170/sidewireiy0.jpg

[SheblomCG]

No commets or crtits?:eek:

[ACantarel]

Well, I´m not a character modeler but in my eyes everything looks fine here! The meshflow seems to be good and the anatomy is correct.
I´ll have to model three persons soon so this is a nice inspiration.

Keep on working :thumbsup:

Cheers
André

[SheblomCG]

ACantarel: Thanks alot man! I am glad i got to help give you a lil bit of inspiration! Very glad of the clean edge flow! Been working on that for awhile now!! Thanks again!
Please guys, andy crits or comments are appreciated!!
I messed about with the head last night, Fixed up proportions, and also put in some generic ears just for placement and position! So here are a render and some wires! Please Crit and Comment!
Render:
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8171/persprendercv8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Wires:
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/9761/perspwiretg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/5403/frontwirecz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/8690/sidewireiv0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Anthonie]

what I like the most is the polyflow. nice edgeloops too.
good work

[SheblomCG]

Thanks alot man! Really appreciate the comment! Will be updateing soon!

[SheblomCG]

Thanks For all the Comments Guys. Havnt updated the model yet, here are just some SSS tests that i did in Modo 202, Very nice prog, only been checkin it out the last few days, but it has potential!
Test Pics:
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/4492/test01hm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/7310/test02kt8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/808/test03wc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/3461/test04yz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Giom]

It's looking good, except maybe for the neck. A little too thick from head-on?

[SheblomCG]

Thanks alot man! Will do some updates tonight for the model tonight! But please more crits the better!! Thanks Guys!

[SheblomCG]

Hey guys
Here is a lil updating of my model! I have gotten quite gatful of this bloody model, so i gave it a break! But now i am back and want to finish this! I have been workin on her face a lil, but i am battliing with it! So any crit is more than welcome!
Renders:
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/6452/bodyrenderkv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/3241/facerenderpc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Wires:
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5910/bodywireperspmf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9906/bodywirefrontkk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9526/bodywiresidehp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2222/facewirepersptk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img458.imageshack.us/img458/9130/facewirefronthm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4750/facewiresidehu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[SheblomCG]

No crits/Comments?

[INFINITE]

Hey Sheblom,

Great start on the model, the topology looks very solid, very good flow. Can I ask what reference are ou using? have you got background templates to model from? because they are a must. As long as you have bags of reference material, 3d.sk is fantastic., you cant go wrong.

I N F I N I T E

[SheblomCG]

INFINITE: Thanks alot man! i am using the Aneta Ref pics from 3d,sk, but i am varying here and there to! I have alot of ref! Going to hopefully carry on with it over the weekend and post up an update! Thank you for the crit! anymore is more than welcome!!!

[younglion]

the model looks great the only crit i have is that the iris or pupil (forgot waht its called) is too sharp

[SheblomCG]

younglion: Thank you very much man! The eye for the moment is just a stand in eye, untill i get round to modleing a proper one! But thank you for the crit and please keep them coming!!

[Ohmi]

I think your mesh work is looking good overall but I in terms of looking natural it's not quite there.. It looks like you've done a lot of details on the model before the form was carefully proportioned.

One thing I'd suggest even though it's kinda late for this particular model.. is to try to nail your proportions with a low poly "cage" model first (blocking form and proportion) and then it's not so hard to edit your mesh later once you're doing the fine details. A lot of careful examination of the form up front on a low poly cage will save you tons of time later. :)

As it stands everything is essentially in the right place it just needs a lot of adjusting.. Keep it up!

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