CGTalk - room at sunset

uncon

01-13-2003, 02:53 PM

hello everyone, this is a room I've been working on for a personal project. I think that it is mostly done except I still need to add little details like stuff on the dressers and things like that.

The idea here is I am going for here is low income and basic. Any coments or critiques are welcome, especially things that need to be added or removed.

This is me first post so forgive me if I screw up the whole picture thing!

Thanks!
<<EDIT!!!>>
regular pic (http://www.stormpages.com/uncon/cgtalk/click3.htm)

high res pic (http://www.stormpages.com/uncon/cgtalk/click2.htm)

http://web.nmsu.edu/~aaberger/bedroom.jpg

Hey! I am getting the hang of this.

uncon

01-13-2003, 02:57 PM

yup messed up the pic link, how about this

click here for link to pic!!! (http://www.stormpages.com/uncon/cgtalk/bedroom2.jpg)

Indavisual

01-13-2003, 02:58 PM

nope still dont work.

uncon

01-13-2003, 03:02 PM

CRAP! ok, no linking to images only websites on my free webspace thingy

try these:
regular pic (http://www.stormpages.com/uncon/cgtalk/click3.htm)

high resolution pic (http://www.stormpages.com/uncon/cgtalk/click2.htm)

uncon

01-13-2003, 05:04 PM

Here is the flat shaded image with no volumetrics!
Let me know what you guys think of this stuff. I am using Lightwave 6.5

http://web.nmsu.edu/~aaberger/bedroomshade.jpg

uncon

01-13-2003, 05:10 PM

more pics

http://web.nmsu.edu/~aaberger/room2.jpg

http://web.nmsu.edu/~aaberger/room3.jpg

uncon

01-14-2003, 08:31 PM

more images
http://web.nmsu.edu/~aaberger/bed.jpg

http://web.nmsu.edu/~aaberger/bed2.jpg

http://web.nmsu.edu/~aaberger/bed3.jpg

WickerMan

01-14-2003, 11:55 PM

that is neat lightning! =)

juntao

01-15-2003, 12:26 AM

very cool scene................i like the wrinkles in the bed

uncon

01-15-2003, 05:29 PM

Thanks I'll be posting updates as I decorate with pictures and stuff.

Tikisan

01-18-2003, 11:19 PM

:thumbsup: very nice...i like the texture you are using on the bed...maybe you could put some chips in the dresser as well...and have the orange/yellow light filter into the rest of the room...but those are just nitpickin comments

AbueluX

01-18-2003, 11:32 PM

cool lighting!!! :thumbsup: . Perhaps some volumetric dust effect through the window light gives more atmosphere =)

springgreenhair

01-19-2003, 02:35 AM

looks really great :)
superb atmosphere :applause:
the only thing which i'd say could be better is the floor....it looks too flat....should maybe be more rough, like a real carpet

flaagan

01-19-2003, 03:42 AM

give the floor and the bed some bump mapping. up close they look too flat and from a distance the texture (phyisical, not image) is lost completely.

bramley1

01-19-2003, 09:16 AM

Looking really good - nice sense of atmosphere

azazel

01-19-2003, 09:54 AM

I like it very much, great atmosphere...
You should change something with the floor, make it wooden or place some rug on it. And add some 'personal details' around in the room, dunno, some books, clock, something like that, telling about owner's personality - but You said You'll add them in your first post ;)

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