Exodia - The Forbidden One, Poay Choon Shee (3D)

[WuJi]

here are some other views

[RAFY]

Hi,

Nice! I however would like to see the floor scaled down so that your character looks bigger in the scene and maybe you could also use more bump on the floor so it doesn’t look so flat. Also the arms look too long for me but that is just me. The energy light in his arm looks very good but the character is not picking enough of this light on his body and I am not seeing any shadow on the floor & walls cast from the light. Overall you did a very good job but I think you can make it look better!

Take care!

[TobyArt]

Great texture, great model. I agree with RAFY's comments above, also my only comment would be the bring stripes on his face have no repaet elsewhere on the body, makes it feel a little unbalanced. Perhaps repeating that pattern on his leg and arm braces? By the way the blue energy thing looks incredible too!

[WuJi]

hi guys, thank you for your comments, to both of you, RAFY and Zyrinx, they are helpful.

i have edited the light project on his body, the texture of the floor and the shadow as well. Hopefully it looks better this time.

About the hand, Rafy, it is longer than it suppost to be cause personally i like a character with longer and bigger size arms, so i made it that way. Hope you guys don't mind.

And Zyrinx, bout the stripes, on the original character, they only apprear on his face, so i try not to edit too much of the character degsign since i already edited quite some parts of it. But, perhaps i'll try it out to see how it will look like.

thanks again guys.

here is an image of the original character.

[RAFY]

Hi,

I think it looks great now! The only critic will be to correct the right arm muscle texture is abrupt change but it’s just a minor thing that can done in PS. Overall I think you maid great improvements and it looks very good!

Take care!

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