far matt painting, Ehsan Dabbaghi (2D)

[Maytridy]

Nice concept, but it looks pretty incomplete. I think it's apparent that you spent less than two hours on this piece, but it has potential. I would spend more time with it.

[Ransom]

the concept is really nice. I think since the shapes of the floating islands are interesting, and the way you have them fading off in the backgound is a really nice affect. I would say the foreground is hurting the image in the lack of detail or of any significance. The lens flare you can take it or leave it. I think that simplifying the textures and just going with the color and shape you have you would be a good direction, but then i am oonly one person.

[arnocob]

:)
Hi!
I like the ambiance...
It 'a good mix between realism and poetry...
Very relaxing...
For me, it's finished, and your idea is well interpreted... I don't see something new (details)to bring to the image.
A small crit : The green area is maybe (for me!)to strong and too much different from the rest...and the towers( minaret : in french)not enough dark...
But it's details.
bye

[iman121]

Salam
eyval in dada in joori ha bayad kar kard
kheyli khoobe.
age in tabestoon beshini 25 sa-ate kar
koni kheyli pishraft mikoni...

[ghassemfarhany]

well done ehsan kep up the good work

[EhsanD]

thanks guys ....
your crites will help me ... Im sure .

[Ali3dartman]

Great Scene & concept, Ehsan... :thumbsup:
4 stars...

Best regards...

[fullillo]

Another kool concept Ehsan. The foreground seems unresolved as others have mentioned. Also the unside of the land masses could use some subtle structure to suggest some volumn. The lighting is nicely done and I like the windmill idea. Don't be in too much of a rush to post work here if you think it is not finished. Take the extra time to polish it off. You can do it!

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