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Hi all, well this is my first short film, please tell me that ir seems to you. The web is in spanish language, sorry.
Thanks for all.
plez click here:
http://webs.ono.com/alexmateovideos/definitivo.zip
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FKMaster
01-12-2003, 11:36 PM
very pretty ! :applause:.....nice motions and goog timing....... :thumbsup:
thesaint
01-13-2003, 05:20 AM
That was sooo cool. My back hurt just watching that little guy lift the rock.
The plot was lost on me. Not sure why he was dropping the rock, what was below it and why it fell back through the top of the screen, but the timing on that lift made it worth the watch.
I liked the shading, lighting and simple camera work too. You established setting well with that medium-long shot.
One thing that did seem strange was the walk at the end. His eyes are locked down, and it is looped big time. The end result is that he looks like is going nowhere, is doing nothing and is thinking, well, nothing. Kind of strange. I'd like it if you had him walking home from the cliff edge all beaten up or something.
Otherwise, great work. I can see i am going to have no shortage of people to take my job if i leave here!
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