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christian108
06-12-2006, 08:19 PM
Hello I have recently finished two matte paintings which are to be used in a portfolio. I am going to animate them a bit and would like some critique if possible. I realize in the industrial slumscape image that the shanty houses look as if they were shot with a wide angle lens. Thank you for your input.

Christian


http://www.christiankugler.com/Lo_rez_Slums.jpg



http://www.christiankugler.com/Hill_temple_lo_rez.jpg
JJASSO
06-12-2006, 09:43 PM
great pieces christian , very photoreal work, in the first one I noticed what you meant with those houses, in the far industry island, " the big one" I think a little moe atmosphere-aerial perspective is needed,
in the second one integration is awesome I like it a lot, some more houses or some details to the left would help a lot to the composition ( for foreground )
great job, I will look forward to see these images with animation
christian108
06-13-2006, 05:27 PM
Thank you james for your input. I appreciate it. I have had a few suggestions from different proffesionals and they are all very good. I will incorporate yours as well. Similar replies seem to be to add something to the foreground in the mountain composition, and that the industrial landscape seems a bit desaturated or "cold" for the environment.

Thank you for your reply though. I appreciate it!

Christian
Velarion
06-19-2006, 12:08 AM
Great matte paintings.You have achived very nice mood congrats:) My only critic is that the foreground rubbles in the first picture seem to be more saturated apart from the general mood.Great work:beer:
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