My cartoon short film

[aLeZ]

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http://webs.ono.com/alexmateovideos/definitivo.zip

[dobermunk]

Senseless violence! I love it!!

Great style going on there, from Background to character - I just really like it.
I think you miss a bit of the comedic potential in that last moment where he looks upward. His realization of impending doom comes all at once, and I think it might be funnier with a classic cartoony double-take. Either that or cut the sound until the very last moment before he looks up. (That would be simpler if you aren't diving into changes).

Very nice piece!

[Frank Dodd]

Very nice little short. The modelling, animation and editing were excelent, its a shame there isnt more content in the short story though. That said very well done! Classic Cartoon style.

[tvtuna]

Strange, I thought this was one of the best little cg short films
I've seen for a while (makes a nice change from demoreels) and
yet only 2 replies, so thought I better say something.

I think the film is called Dimon and the Stone? and presumably 'Tirame' = 'Throw'? and probably Dimon is Demon..

I thought the creature was excellent, he's not immediately
appealing, but you give him a lot of character using facial
expressions, and especially his walk, plus you manage to create
the impression of a great sense of weight when he carries
the stone to the edge. I'm not overly keen on the drunken
way he looks up at the end, I thought the speed was good
but he could have perhaps just tilted his head straight back
and left his hand where it was, and maybe even have left
the camera view there as he disappears off the bottom of
the screen rather than changing angle for a clearer shot.

The colour and the text was excellent. Could have perhaps
added some heat shimmer here and there, ie. when close up
to Dimon the sign post is in the background so maybe could
have tested a shimmering effect there.

All in all thought it was great. Hope to see him in more films.

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