New Weapons , Yang Guodong (2D)

[Saikin]

This is a solid job here. I like the scale although it could be more defined. The main thing bugging me though is the left foot. It's at asn awkward angle and it doesn't really flow with walking movements, you know?

Other than that, great job

[UmbrellaDays]

I like the idea and everything is well done but has not come together. The perspective seems to be the only issue. If that was resolved i think the piece would be a real good one.

[Rizo]

Nice detail, but you need to be more carefull with your perspective, the first thing that jump to the eye is the builgins in the background have one angle and the characters are standing in a diferent one. Also the perspective lines defined by the bridge suggest should meet in the horizon line (wich is also the real high of the viewer) and the city is way below it, wich creates a confusing effect to it.... Again, you have a nice detail level, you only need to follow the perspective rules (most of the books cover these principle just fine, also the Gnomon DVD of Feng Zhu about Fundamentals of Shot Design is very complete).

[still128]

thanks guys!! thanks for these suggestions

Saikin :the robot is not walking ,he is standing on a Mobile tool,:)



Rizo: I want show u my camera position.
this is my point of view
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j216/still128/assssss.jpg

hope more guys can Join the discussion :),I need your suggestion.



http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j216/still128/point.jpg

[elmarko]

I think the perspective is a little off, though i actually think it adds to the piece in a way, it makes it look more alien and less present day earth. Good shot either way, some fascinating looking buildings in the background, something maybe you could expand upon in a future work? :)

[dcon]

Hey Still, i'm not saying that you didn't have a perspective presented in the image, the issue is that if you set a tight grid on it (not thick lines) you'll see that not all the verticals for the third vanishing point are right and they're not the same direction of the standing robot or the guys below the image. Even if he's walking down the ramp he must be standing vertically, otherwise he may fall frontward. Maybe that's why the image of the ramp is not creal now in the image.

[still128]

THX guys,Your suggestions are very valuable

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