Races of Middle Earth - character - Lukashi

[mrmark]

where is she? i wanna follow her! lol

[Lukashi]

Her pack of wolves will eat you :D, but anyways here are her eyes so far...

[OZ]

HEY THAT THING IS LOOKING TO ME!!! :eek: HELP!!!
he he he.....never mind....im a little flipped brained......good start,curious to see more.

[Lukashi]

NOOO dont visit this thread that just what she wants you to do, dont you see OZ, its a trap!

[Lukashi]

a small update...

[Lukashi]

another update. Thankfull i did a women wip just before this contest so ive still got all my steps memorized :bounce:

[Agent D]

Nice idea. Are you going to model the wolves too? The modelling looks good so far, except that the geometry missing around her mouth looks like a beard. ;) Anyway, good luck! I'll keep an eye on your entry

[Lukashi]

Agent D, I think ill just put gleaming eyes in the darkround to imply wolves are there, no one would go into those woods if they actually saw the wolves :P
a bit more progress...

[Lukashi]

Another update, dont worry guys ill tweak it so she looks nicer, (i know right now she could only scare people out of the woods hehehehe)

[Lukashi]

Okie, shes still not hot yet...more tweaks needed...any tips would be nice, ill post my concept tomorrow

[KingMob]

that girl has a hobbit nose man! fix that up im sure she wil be cute as a button...

:beer:

[Lukashi]

Here is the stetch final got to a scanner :D

[Lukashi]

another update any tips would be appreaciated :D

[Lukashi]

Another update...

[face]

Hi !
I've never modeled a human head before but i guess i could still try to give you some tips :)

I think her eyes may need a bit more mystery...
her nose really needs a bit more teaking... I think there is a site where it says what are the proportions of a face so that it would be really pretty. I really can't recall the site right now.. sorry...

btw, have you tried to look at some magazines with women pictures? (NO, not that kind of magazines... regular ones....)

great concept :thumbsup:
and good work ;)

[Lukashi]

Thanks face :D heres another small update, last one for today

[Agent D]

Looking much better! :thumbsup:

[Lukashi]

Thx agent, is the cgtalk irc thing working?? I cant seem to connect!

[mrmark]

she certainly is becoming beautiful
for hair, i would go with long flowing hair, but thats just my opinion

as for irc, on the server window thing it said they are phasing out openprojects.irc and replacing it with something
i cant remember what though!! i should have payed more attention yes?

[Agent D]

Now it's irc.freenode.net
It should work, I was there about an hour ago.

[Lukashi]

alright last update for tonight, shes looking less horrible yay :D, anyways ill make some hair and teeth and ears and textures soon (the whole works)

[face]

:) it's going great...

i knew i had a link about the hands and face proportions somewhere, here it is: http://www.anticz.com/learn.htm
Sorry if it this looks a bit too basic for you :hmm:

keep it going :) (i've always loved a good female face)
:thumbsup:

[Lukashi]

Hey thanks face, i checked out some of the stuff at that site and its pretty good :), the 3d tutorials where a bit basic but the concepts behind the 2d face ones where quite intresting, i still have to finish the one with the indian guys face, but so far its quite intresting, thanks for the tip :)

[KingMob]

hey luke, its looking better since last time i saw it...I stilly ou need to make the nose more feminine, but thats just imo.

I expect great things from you! get yourself a white russian and keep going :)

[Lukashi]

THx king...damm i still cant get on the cgtalk irc server iono y it wont work :(

[KingMob]

stuff got changed

the server is now
IRC.FREENODE.NET
port 777


i Just logged on, so try that.

[Lukashi]

another update

[Lukashi]

Heres another update added somewhat elf ears, the teeth/mouth still need redifining

[Lukashi]

any comments appritiate :D

[Agent D]

Definitely improving, Lukashi. One are that seems off to me are the cheek/mouth creases, which seem a bit pronounced. I can't think of anything else at the moment, except that the teeth need replacing soon. :)

[Lukashi]

Thank you Agent, yes ill get to those teeth in time

Heres another update...god bored of modelling did some lights stuff :D

[Lukashi]

I told her not to, but she got a nose job =p

[Lukashi]

another update, im happy witht he face so im starting the main body

[eddy-3ddy]

if you are happy, I;m happy

Nice work

[Lukashi]

Thanks 3ddy, anyways i added about 2 more vertices so i gues its time for another update, heheeh just kidding

[Lukashi]

boobies! Anyways i need to reshape them a bit...the hardest part was getting the shoulder to breast area right...Dont worry ladies she'll be clothed later on =p

[Lukashi]

Tweak tweak tweak:arteest:

[Agent D]

This model is going to look really good when you're done texturing. Keep up the good work!

[Lukashi]

THanks agent,
Another update, heres me getting bored and fooling around with max 5's radiosity, im new to it so its crappy but im trying to get better :hmm:

[eddy-3ddy]

He, some new option for you, area shadows. Gives more realistic fading shadows... (I hope I gived you news instead you say "DUH")

[Lukashi]

yah ill use area shadows once im done modelling, i was just messing around with that render =p

anyways heres a real update...

[eddy-3ddy]

Hmm, yeah, sorry ehe :blush:

I think you have to push up a little bit the breasts. a little bit...

[Lukashi]

More perky eh? I dig it :D

[Lukashi]

Alright started work on the arm area...

[Lukashi]

changed the shoulders a lil bit and added some normal lighting

[Lukashi]

A pretty big update, anatomy still needs work, any tips would be appretiated...

[Lukashi]

actually crap now that i look at it the anatomy is very bad...:thumbsdow

Anyways ill fix it once i have time :shrug:

[eddy-3ddy]

Hmm, maybe...

here is one. More hips.

Uhm, add a halfmoon of poly under the belly so see has a real belly.

Less bone displacement at the key bone (we call it sleutelbeen) connected tooo the..... shoulder.

Add some ribbs



EDITED------------->Sorry 4 the color, but that makes you see my edit hopefully, more chest space, room for air how do I subscribe that

[Lukashi]

thanks for the comment 3ddy, heres an update, i tried to address the belly issue and the chest space, also more hips....still needs tweaking...

[Lukashi]

mmm ok starting to look less bad...i need to give her a nicer stomach and better hips...

[Agent D]

To me, the whole torso looks very short, as if her hips start way too high. It would be easier to tell from a front view though. Other than that, it looks good. :thumbsup:

[Lukashi]

yah true...ill lower it, lol had the exact opposite problem on my last 3d chick =p

[Fetus23]

Looking good lukashi!!...I think your right to stretch the torso out a bit. If she is a short elvin type girl...maybe stumpy is the way to go. Regardless of that its good work so far, keep going!!

:beer:
fetus

[Lukashi]

Actually I have a question now...Is it the torso that seems to short or the stomach?

[Lukashi]

alrighteo, i chose the lather, made the stomach longer, i think it looks ok

[Lukashi]

a slight update...

[Lukashi]

another update..

[dies-irae]

starting to look real good! (the head rocks already!)
the collar bone seems a little too sharp, and the shoulders a little... stiff.

the torso proportions are cool now!
keep it up!

[eddy-3ddy]

Originally posted by 3ddy

Less bone displacement at the key bone (we call it sleutelbeen) connected tooo the..... shoulder.


Yes, I didn;t knew the name of that, I ment the collar bone:argh:

[Lukashi]

thanks for the input dies-irae, and 3ddy, alright yes ill fix that collar bone, ill keep working on it, thanks for the support :D

[Lukashi]

Alrighteo, another update

[Lukashi]

bigger hips by request

[Agent D]

Looking good, but I think she's still got a weird thing going on with her hip/stomach/torso. Stand up and let your arms rest by your sides, and your wrists should be around your hip joints. I don't think it's as much a problem with her arms, just that her whole hip should start lower. Other than that, I think the hips could use some more definition to make the hip bone and underlying muscles visible. Anyway, keep it up, she's looking better with each update. :thumbsup:

[Lukashi]

Thanks Agent :D

Heres an update, got bored, and fun with lights, just standard max spotlights

[Fetus23]

Nice update lukashi. I'm really feeling her soft skin...:thumbsup:
Better get to modeling those arms and legs!! :surprised :wip: :wip:
I'm curious as to how you will cloth her...weapons etc...

:wavey:
fetus
p.s. I'll be feeding your color fetish shortly ;)

[Lukashi]

thanks fetus, heres a stetch for the hair dress and wings...just got bored and did it in 5 min ;)

[Lukashi]

hes another lighting thing, i donno why im so lazy and dont just model it, :shrug:

[KingMob]

much better lighting...but ciome on man...model...enough irc'ing. You are becoming like me...I should not be a roll model!!! I have a sickness, an addiction even!


Love the photoshop sketch man :beer:

lets see some legs, hair and hands!

[Lukashi]

lol king, well thing is ive been really busy this past week with midterms exams and projects, also had the sat 2's :(

[Lukashi]

alright started the dress...

i plan to give her silky white wings...

[KingMob]

cool dres man...I think it would look pretty snazzy with a fancified belt as well... good update man!

[Lukashi]

Thanks king, i was thinking of going with lots of sprilly things everywhere :)

[Lukashi]

ok bah i decided to drop the dress...this is my new idea, just a stetch

[Lukashi]

another update

[Lukashi]

refinement on the illiac crest(a new word a learned today :) )

[tsuru]

http://tofud.dyndns.org/downloads/cgtalk/ereaa-mod.jpg

I modified your render with some lines that i thought might help IMHO.

[rolhionjs]

very nice modeling ! I like this face alot :) :applause: :applause:

[Lukashi]

Thank you Tsuru for the reference, ill fix it sometime soon, and thanks strike for the compliment :D

[Mangled Poly]

Keep up the good work.. i do like the hand crossing idea better... it seems more fantasyish.. (if thats a word)

[Lukashi]

thanks mangled poly, heres another update

[Lukashi]

a small update

[Lukashi]

i think ill go with this hair design..maybe some flowers in it or something

[Lukashi]

cheek update...

[KingMob]

Lukashi my man, she's looking great!

I love the flowers Idea, she looks like she could be of the middle earth hippies/elves type of persuasion..I like taht hair, flowing and wild.

Small crit is her body still feels a little squat to me, possibly her head to, maybe stretching it all up a pinch would help.

Regardless glad to see you working on it.

What about making her clothes leaves and fauna and flowers and stuff...I think that could looks sorta cool.

:thumbsup:

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