My room

[MrMJKnight]

Looking good man!

Is it ment to be that grainy tho?

[vikramvr]

hi mate, good to see people from the uk. Im from bournemouth. cheers. The settings for the dirtmap shader is low at the movement and this is not rendered at production quality. Ill post some production quality renders soon.

[MrMJKnight]

Cool man :D

I see your in India, what you doin over there? :)

[vikramvr]

im am from india basically, but right now im at bournemouth, doing a course in computer animation.

[MrMJKnight]

Ohhh hehe, nice one :P

[hoodedpython]

Nice modelling could you make another render with less graingness.

[Ministry]

hey,
The render looks cool .. but the only thing is u r illuminating the indoor too much. The indoor looks too bright for the sunlight. A sun light with a boucing factor would have made them look a better. other wise the models looks good.. the cloth over the bed looks a bit solid. may be u should have textured a bit. The window cloth is the best. The translucency is amazing.

[vikramvr]

I wanted the scene to be bright like that. The animation is going to be a lighting chage from morning to night, with the ceiling bulb switching on and the tv switching on. Thank you for your comments. Ill post an image with less graininess and adjusted lighting soon. cheers.

[vikramvr]

hi everyone,
Ive worked on the comments that youve all given and have come up with a pic with less graininess and better lighting. Please do comment on it.Thank you very much
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/6383/goodrender1ja.th.jpg (http://img96.imageshack.us/my.php?image=goodrender1ja.jpg)

[MrMJKnight]

Supurb, it's much better now Vikram.

The lighting is much better.

[vikramvr]

cheers. is it too yellow?

[XCNuse]

thats a tiny little bed? are you sure proportions are anywhere close to where they should be?

those chairs compared to your bed are.. really .. not right lol

[vikramvr]

thanks for the comments mate. i guess you are right. But im not sure if its just the view that makes the bed look smaller.

[vamadotcg]

hi vikram

good work its looking really good but few thing i wd like to point out which r already mentioned by others like beds proportion with side table and chairs looks strange.

i think if u r using sun as ur only light source in the room it is too evenly lit u shd get more directional shadows from wardrobe and bed on the wall and stuff and also more bounce light from the sun. i am not sure but r u using ne kind of ambient light in the room? cause u r getting very bright light on ur bed specially on red bed sheet right at the corner.

shadow color is too gray i think thats ur dirt map. u r getting really dark black shadow near bed's leg and near wall panel between two curtains.

curtain material looks good but needs some improvement on beds specially bed sheets.

thats it for now man i hope im not too critical well this is wht i felt take ur time and good luck

cheers

vaibhav

[vikramvr]

thanx man, but this is an older thread. Ive put the character into the scene and posted a wip. This is the link for it.Check it out too..

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=384098

BUt the sad part is Ive started to render the animation. I think it wont look so obvious in an animation. Thanx for the reply anyway man

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