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kali1900
06-06-2006, 06:19 PM
This is the last character I finished about 5 months ago, so it's been through alot of crit already :) thought I'd post it here to see if anybody has anything different to say.

Sorry about the ghey overlay of my website address on the maps, I have no idea why I continue to do it ...? its not like anybody is going to steal it.
http://www.edge-zero.com/images/portfolio/3d/3dwork-32.jpg
I have .. I hope, learnt a bit since then and maybe my next character may look a little better. I'm currently working on a shareware horseracing game :)
jfalconer
06-07-2006, 03:08 AM
I think her hoody would benefit from some more layers in the fur part, or more resolution in the texture - my eyes went straight to her face, which seems the focal point and right now the furry lining is quite blurry. The many pockets lining her jacket are a nice touch, but somehow the texture makes them stand out as being seperate, maybe a drop shadow surrounding them would blend them into her jacket more?
ojko
06-07-2006, 07:50 AM
The body seems to be a little out of proportion. Shoulders too wide, legs too short, etc. I also can't decide if the model is supposed to be male or female. The texture sheet looks female but the model doesn't. This is probably down to the odd proportions and a reasonably harsh face.
Dennispls
06-07-2006, 08:10 AM
Some weird choice of laying out your uvs
The weapon is something i really really dislike
the wood differs on both parts
the "metal" is just black with scratches
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