View Full Version : Walk Cycle... please critique
chepe297 01-10-2003, 09:12 PM Hi Everyone
I've just made my first walk cycle. Can you please critic on this.
Thank-you all.
regards,
pete
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http://www.ziggwi.com/V3/main/gallery/pete/animation/downloads/04/m04.zip
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http://www.ziggwi.com/V3/main/gallery/pete/animation/downloads/04/q04.zip
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Khepri
01-10-2003, 11:08 PM
hi!
here are some things, the shoulders should move more, atm they are very stiff, same thing with the hips, thats the reason the legs seem to move kind of awkward, also make sure that the motion is apropriate for the character, meaning in this case it should look funny and quick because thats what you expect from mario...
anyway, its a good start so keep it up, change the things noted above and you will see that he will look more alive that way...
cheers:beer:
FKMaster
01-11-2003, 10:56 PM
hi !
not bad.....really !
the knee are very high.....set it lower....and i think the he head shakes too much ....
regards
FKMaster
chepe297
01-11-2003, 11:20 PM
Khepri - Thanks for the feedback. :scream:
FKMaster - Thanks for your help. :beer:
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