View Full Version : The old man and the window, David Melchor Diaz (3D)
dmelchordiaz 06-01-2006, 07:05 AM http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/191690/191690_1149145532_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/191690/191690_1149145532_large.jpg)
Title: The old man and the window
Name: David Melchor Diaz
Country: España
Software: 3ds max, HDR Shop, Photoshop, VRay, ZBrush
Hi. This is my latest work and my first work with zbrush program.
I hope you enjoy it. I have finished the work, but I have generated two compositions.
The first version is a color composite and the second, have sepia tones like a old Photography. Comments are welcome.
Hi Res Color:
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1514/viejocolor20008tx.jpg
Hi Res Sepia:
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7624/viejosepia20007ug.jpg
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Josemaya
06-01-2006, 09:11 AM
Very good work David. I like the light and the model. The seam of the shirt and the eyelash are very realistic. Muy bueno Bio!!
5 stars from me
Congratulations
joserod
06-01-2006, 10:13 AM
Great job bio!!! I like this composite.
Spanish version: que mola todo cohonees. Ya tienes piloto pa ponerle al leon.
Un saluoo tiuuuuu
Jaimote
06-01-2006, 10:37 AM
Hi Bio:
I like it very much, especially lighting. Just one thing, I think that reflections in the eyes are to sharpen, I would blurry it a little more.
Que arte tienes jodío :thumbsup:
Un abrazo:
Jaime
Rlloret
06-01-2006, 10:41 AM
Hi Melchor King! :)
Good work! The light is specialy great! :thumbsup: He is like Patrick Stewart (Jean-Luc Picard Star Trek) but old man version?
I miss a skin shader but in your next work I hope that you used it. :bounce:
Rlloret.
Davision
06-01-2006, 12:31 PM
nice work:thumbsup:
i like the head and all this wrinkles :)
...but i really missing the skin shader, exspecially in such a bright light situation a skin shader would make it much better
jdtiX
06-01-2006, 01:16 PM
Good work! The light is specialy great! :thumbsup: He is like Patrick Stewart (Jean-Luc Picard Star Trek) but old man version?
:p An old man version of an old man?
dmelchordiaz
06-01-2006, 01:45 PM
Yes, more people say me that he looks like Patrick Stewart. :-) Maybe he will be this guy when he leaves startrek ship. :-)
Grungefm
06-01-2006, 01:55 PM
Good Stuff, Bio! Just the eyes, looks a bit weird to me. Maybe its because of the small lines inside, due by the reflection map. Kinda too "sharpy" to me.
pd:
biotrufa setaaaaa
Very detailed work, the skin is perfect, the light is very nice. Only I think there is something wrong in the eyes... they seems not so realistic...
Good done! :thumbsup:
dEDa
Rlloret
06-01-2006, 03:07 PM
Hi, again!
jdtiX: ja,ja,ja,ja....:)
Rlloret
Sir3DMIND
06-01-2006, 03:09 PM
Very good work Bio, I like apecialli the lightning and the composition.
Spanish:
Como molas no??? A mi se me parece al abuelo de Heidi, pero vamos, la verdad es que en lo que tardo en hacer el scroll a la imagen se me parece a mucha gente.
GOOD WORK!!!
Eduardo
LuisTomas
06-02-2006, 05:55 AM
very good work.
Lo que más me gusta es la iluminación y el detalle que tiene la textura de la cara.
Muy bueno, Bio
dmelchordiaz
06-02-2006, 06:20 AM
Here is the wire, without zbrush mesh. Because something want to see it.
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/5084/viejowire5ft.jpg
plasteredcat
06-02-2006, 07:45 AM
Nice one, Bio! It´s a pleasure seeing that you keep your work up, learning and improving. No crits from me, just the effort is worth it... Go, Bio, go!!:thumbsup:
( Bloody hell, the old bloke´s reading my mind!!)
BUDATHOME
06-02-2006, 12:02 PM
Very good work ,man!!
Te digo lo mismo que te ha dicho todo el mundo, tio, lo único que me falla son los ojos, que quedan excesivamente brillantes, lo que los hace parecer cristal.Y es verdad también que un shader con sss hubiera quedado de puta madre.Quizá el tono de la piel es demasiado plano y le falta algún matiz de color, alguna mancha (que es tipico de los viejos)..lo que lo hace ligeramente acartonado( también supongo que será por la falta de translucidez en la piel lo que me da esa sensación).Lo que si me gusta es la expresión y la composicón en general, queda muy bien por donde le entra la luz, le da un aspecto realista en general.
Muy bien, tio, enhorabuena Bio!!
Necronomiden
06-02-2006, 09:32 PM
wow se ve muy bien, se parese al actor que interpreta a magneto en los Xmen:scream:
Johnnybiped
06-04-2006, 07:41 PM
Hi Bio, fantastic work, the ilumiation and the textures are excelent.
Molas mucho tío, saludos. ;)
dmelchordiaz
06-05-2006, 06:10 AM
Thanks to all for yours comments. They are of many utility to improve future works.
Guanny
06-05-2006, 11:49 AM
Ey! Bio,:thumbsup:
Good work dude, I agree with the other guys, SSS shader ;)
Estoy de acuerdo con el budy, es una pena lo del shader, hubiera ganado mucho con
esta iluminacion tan guapa.:)
neozenit
06-06-2006, 11:46 PM
Very good work
muy buen trabajo, aunque tiene pequeños fallos, el resultado general esta realmente bien :thumbsup:
un saludo y *****
neozenit
tiflos20
07-11-2006, 01:10 PM
ole bio, ta quedao to wapo! no me habia pispao de que habias subido nada hasta hoy, buen curro man! verdad lo del shader, y quizas la ropa demasiado tiesa.. pero mola en general... saludetes :))
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