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pearblossom
05-30-2006, 07:12 PM
Hi,
this is a portrait of my mom's friend. Photo ref. used--inked by hand and colored/cleaned in P'shop. About a day and a half of work. I'd appreciate any feedback y'all would have.. cheers! =)


http://www.crackerfire.net/dailySketch/dave1_ink.jpg

GSmiley
05-30-2006, 08:33 PM
I'm sorry, but I don't have any criticisms of this. There's nothing bad I can see there to fix. I just wanted to tell you good work.

EDIT: Maybe get rid of the clouds, they don't match the style and aren't helping anything. That's all I got.

Nehym
05-30-2006, 08:37 PM
Well i guess i can only say the same thing as the one above me; i do not see any real major flaws. I really do like the comic book feel this has to. Great work.

General Midi
05-30-2006, 09:07 PM
I really expected you to be dutch.

That man looks like a Dutch t.v. celeb.
http://www.wateeneikel.nl/img/5148.pic

pearblossom
05-31-2006, 05:30 AM
hey thanks guys! General Midi--LOL! That pic actually looks quite a bit like my mom's friend, for real. I'll have to let him know. =)

dankitchener
05-31-2006, 01:10 PM
I have to agree with the other comments too, nothing really to comment on other than I really like the cartoon style, very clean and direct and great composition.

HellBoy
05-31-2006, 02:51 PM
very well done pearblossom, I really like the style, just like other posts, well done

The cloud thing suggested by GSmiley should work well, I think just plain blue-sky colour would really stand out. Plus great details on the plan especially the wheels

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