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HollowGround
05-28-2006, 09:14 AM
Hi everyone, this is my first post here at cgtalk. I've been a long time lurker but have never actually dared to post any of my work due to the intimidating amount of pro-ness here :love:

Anyhow, I have a mid-year art exam coming up on tuesday and this is a painting of a poster that i'm doing for it...its near completion, however I feel like theres something really wrong with the character's nose and facial features (maybe shading?) in general, yet after many tries i still can not fix it. So any pointers in the right direction or even some sketching/painting on top of it would be GREATLY appreciated. Thanks every much in advance :)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/6939/wipshow38pd.jpg
nafa
05-28-2006, 03:59 PM
The image is way too dark to see the nose and facial features for any comment. On the otherhand, I observed some other issues:

Her right iris is higher than her left. There is also the
question what is the light source that lighted up the highlighted part of her body/dress which are shielded from the moon, the apparent main light source.
HollowGround
05-29-2006, 10:27 AM
well.....tomorrow i have to hand it in...i worked on it some more today...hopefully this version is better :shrug:

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/1387/finalforweb7xx.jpg

keep the critiques coming tho if u have any...it would be greatly appreciated :)

EDIT: thanks alot nafa on ur comment about the light source...i hoped i've fixed it now :)
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