Character: girl on cables

[yinako]

8/10 for presentation, karma to you

[slice56]

nice job! the only thing i can see you should change are the tubes. everything in the pic seems to be textured, but the tubes look like they have a default blinn on them. give them some color :)

[Tommi]

Ah, you can see the image by pressing the reply button. Strange thing.
Just wanted to complain about a missing image and now I see myself forced to say something about it.

Well, her eyes are great and her face is very cute. The texture of the suite lacks something... maybe a higher resolution, more detail or something like that should be applied. There are lots of aliasing problems, so increase AA, make a higher res image or maybe you tried to decrease resolution afterwards... mhm... than buy another image software :p

There is one spelling mistake -> "damage"
the fractal image looks a bit out of place - I'd recommend to view a close up of the brain - maybe zoomed to neuron full size (would be cool). The hoses, cables should be more scratchy and look more used. The machine's surface material might be tweaked for a less plastic-like look.

But therefore I love the design and the setting. Also there's nothing to complain about the models, to my opinion.

:thumbsup:

[jfalconer]

Yeah its an interesting idea (althought I prefer the Ghost in the Shell approach in terms of design aesthetics).

Crits: The fractal screen doesn't have any clear purpose (and if you are going with a fractal, perhaps the "thumbprint of god" [the Mandelbrot set] would be better suited), the brain scan looks cheesey (and what it has to do with gravity is beyond me, maybe replace with the word "engaged" or something I don't know) and the green suit ... well, is this a teaser for Lawnmower Man 2? This looks like it has some issues connecting around the pelvis and through the thighs... The textures on the metal look like pieces from the Deathstar (these become especially problematic on the smaller screws near her chest). And yeah the tubes connecting into her head look very plain.

Also there is more than one spelling error; "outer" and "damage". This kind of makes me wonder how much time or thought was put into it.

The face looks pretty good. :shrug:

[zenonithus]

Nice model! love the eyes and the camera angle.

[unrealwarfare]

futuristic concept is always the best

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