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Shockwave
03-11-2002, 10:30 AM
Just wanted to post this to get some critics. I havent textured it yet. But the colors are the ones he will be. This is a character from a japanese manga called Jojo's Bizarre Adventures. If any of you have a chance you should watch the anime by the same name. It kicks ass!
I made it in Maya, the body is a Sub-D. The rest of the parts are Nurbs.
underdog
03-11-2002, 10:45 AM
the background is evil
Shockwave
03-11-2002, 10:49 AM
Just so people know, I just want a critic on the character. The background is there only because I didnt want the default black or white background.
Sorry if the background is ugly. I wont do it next time.
chrislomaka
03-11-2002, 05:51 PM
looks pretty good.

i can't see too much of the head; but then again, the oddness i see there might just be from the manga referance you're working from.

the torso seems a bit odd. namely, the rib cage seems a bit squished from side-to-side. it should be wider, and bland more smoothly into the trapesius(sp?) on the back.
Delucubus
03-11-2002, 11:34 PM
Hey, I like the design but I see problems in his anatomy. His arms look too short and the muscles in his legs look funny too. I would definately look into some of the anatomy problems, this guy could be really cool.
Sangotten
03-11-2002, 11:42 PM
Cool man Anime rules!

But the upper arms are to big, and the upperlegs seem to have weird muscles...=^.^=
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