Still-life: paveway, big door.

[Notum]

I like it... it looks good, if a little plain. I'd like to see some more details on it. It looks like a loading bay for trucks, so it would be nice to see a number or company label above the door.
Also there is some tiling in the stone/concrete texture.

Nice lighting... looks like a bright sommer day... or even a cold autum day. Hehe... can't decide.

Just add some more detail and you'll have a very nice image there.

[Remi]

some trash(litter) would do nicely:thumbsup:

[HapZungLam]

thx for the suggestions.

here is a closer render;)

[Zukum]

Looking good. How about some rubber bumpers so the trucks don't back into the door. The only item that looks odd to me is the asphalt below the door. Is that a concrete pad below the door? The ashphal seemed to be "humped" visually in that vicinity.

[HapZungLam]

oh no, you spot it. i was too lazy to make those. since you spot it. i don't think i can hide. i must make those..:curious: :arteest:

[Tumerboy]

Looks good, if a bit plain . . .

I'd just say to lighten up the dirt on the concrete, the dirt on the wall looks good, but the dirt in the corners where the concrete meets is a bit dark.

And add some more elements to this scene, it's kinda boring as is. . . well done, but plain.

[HapZungLam]

update

[HapZungLam]

i guess i won't spend more time on it anymore. i am running out of time

[Mythigo]

Hey, I think that's looking great. Very real.:applause:

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