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smalyon
05-26-2006, 07:06 PM
Heya, I'm kinda new to digtal painting. I got my tablet in January and I've been experimenting in Photoshop Elements 3.0 and Painter Essentials for the past little while. This is my first big project and it's not turning out so well.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/2531/wipcopy0sn.jpg


I really need some c&c on this. Theres a LOT wrong with it and I'd like some suggestions. Feel free to do paint-overs.

secretasianman
05-27-2006, 08:47 AM
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c290/bluefuzzy626/wipcopy0sn01.jpg

sorry i am a bit tired and you can tell.

head int eh back was to flat.
bridge of the nose was to big
more def in the collar bone area
she has no shoulders
forarm to short
little mor edef in the jaw
def in the face is off
shape of face is off
shape of lips are off
shape of nose is off
area where the breast and the back of the shoulder area needs more def
finger shape hand needs to be worked on
eyebrows need to be fixed
cheek area is low
reshape breasts
redo hand wrist area
hand def is off
hair shape is to plain

more later maybe, to tired as is.

smalyon
05-27-2006, 02:40 PM
Thanks for the suggestions! I'll get to work on it.

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