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kacorkiraly
05-26-2006, 09:46 AM
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Title: at station of gentle silence
Name: czakó józsef
Country: Hungary
Software: Photoshop

Hello, thank to visit my picture.

At he begining of making the picture the concept was simply to make a girl portrait, but i continoud that till i got a whole picture in lack of more details. I tried to create some atmosphere with the bacgground.

help me with your thoughts and critics, and all the bests for you.
kbarts
05-26-2006, 11:44 AM
Hello Kacorkirály!


Interesting pic. I like her face! but meybe more details on her body be better. At first sight I focused on the brown/orange vertical block... She has the same colour that the the line behind.

I like your style very much!

Remélem érthető, bár magyarúl is megfogalmazom: A csajszi kicsit egybe olvad a vonallal, és első nézésre a barna-narancs blokk vonza a szemem. És a feje túl kivágott hatást kelt, mert a nyaka már fel olyan kidolgozott. Remélem nem veszem el a kedved a rajzolástól, tetszik a stílusod, csak valahogy ennél nem érzem azt az erőt, mint a többi képedben.
kacorkiraly
05-26-2006, 11:48 AM
thank you! right critic.

a kedvem sosem fogja tudni elvenni senki! remélem:)
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