Sea Dancers - Water, Diane Özdamar (2D)

[Darthiir]

I really like this style and your use of colours. I also just like the image/feel to it. Very romantic!

4*

*wave*

[VIVI]

i think i like it maybe you can give prominence to　her body..
Her hair was messed up　and neglect　configuration．．
I don't know if I'm making myself clear. ．．

[SirNeo]

Nice work, colors great! 4 stars for me!

[Garciar]

I like very much, good work, my only suuggestion is that the bubbles on the top could be more detailed, 4 stars:thumbsup:

[Runecaster]

^^ If you notice that the bubbles near the faces are very much detailed one can surmise that she intended for the outlaying parts of the piece to remain painterly so the focus stays on the faces.

Also, they are underwater, her handling of the hair is quite well done actually.



I think this piece is beautiful and very professionally done. :thumbsup:

[Rysh]

beautiful work!...color palette is good!

[Imirie]

Aww, that's so cute!
I love how they're looking at each other. And the movement, and the colors.. it's all very nice. :)

(And thanks for the WIP)

[Coltzero]

Great job, they really looks their about to kiss.

Can't stop looking at the bodies. Those scales and fins are so nice!!

[zome]

wow...... a work so amazing!!

[MattBlair]

The height of the piece is really working. The spacing of where you place the figures in the piece really made this composition. This mite be my favorite by you. Nice to see you over here.

[danesh]

So Cool,and very impressing!
good luck!:)

[Artist-Lounge]

Very nice and atmospheric, I just find the guy figure very soft.

[waheednasir]

good work dianae...i like the features of the girl and the over all mood... :thumbsup:.

[Dianae]

Thank you very much for your comments and critiques, they are very nice and constructive!
About the hair, I agree about the fact that it needs some more work. I'll try to work a little bit more on it and to post an edited version of this painting as soon as possible :)
About the bubbles, LabyrinthineMind is right. I wanted to focus on the faces and to leave the rest of the painting a little bit blurry / undetailed. I should blur them more maybe.
I'll post another work of the serie (fire) as soon as possible, I'm actually working on it.
Thank you very much for the feedback everybody!

[elnady]

Hi Diane
Nice colors and textures,i really like it
Good job!

[Raido]

You've created a beautiful work. The color is very calming and pleasant. I love the girl's expression - there's a lot feeling in it, more feeling than in the guy's face, I think. My only critique is that the upper bubbles are a bit too rough compared to the detalized and smooth technique of the faces and bodies

[walrus]

Really beautiful work. Lovely palete and figure and face renderring. Nice job!

-mike

[DUBNICKY]

Wow...it remembers me those excellent guache works by Enki Billal...or ...Juan Gimenez...I love the atmosphere...colours as well...

[Maestra]

Wonderfull work, I like the posture and the colors.
Very neat and gentle.
looking forward to your art ;)

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