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wsaad
05-25-2006, 08:39 AM
Been through many try outs during the last year none of them really worked out





I think this one worked out !!!

I need help about the overall atmosphere, river, Castle, moon, clouds and if there any techniques that could help me enhance it more.

Or may be any useful advice would be really great .

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/7237/start0012za.jpg

aldog
05-25-2006, 01:44 PM
very good start and your eery atmosphere is being acheived very well, the moon also looks very good.
right now it seems a little....disproportionate...maybe?
I'd say you should make the castle quite a bit bigger and move it to the left so it extends past the point of view, have your trees on the right side of the castle and do more than one, also maybe move the moon up a bit, and maybe to the right.

painter_0
05-25-2006, 02:07 PM
thnx aldog that was really helpfull :thumbsup:
here some Progess

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2371/start0026hn.jpg

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/2660/start0038qh.jpg

painter_0
05-25-2006, 02:10 PM
more progress

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/9440/draft9ir.jpg

oogieboogietoogie
05-25-2006, 04:32 PM
It looks very realistic, but the perspective throws me off. Considering the size of the tree and the fact that its very dark, it seems that the castle is very small.

I'm not sure how you would accomplish this, but perhaps trying to reinforce a distance between the tree/lake and the castle?

I enjoy the feel and the realism of this piece. Keep it up :p

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