JOY-bot

[strogoff]

That`s sweet! The body really rocks, especially the see through tits. the only thing that bothers me is the strange looking eyes - they`re much too large. I think you should try more cute ones.

[Nicobertlin]

How about a desert or rocky background. She do look like a "sandrider" of some sort. Or mabye a futuristic crappy alley with some strange garbage laying around. She could be a "working girl" in that alley.

Like the eyes. nomather what Strogoff said. :thumbsup:

[PaulCarry]

Heres an update - i found a bit more time to work on this.

Strogoff - Ill be building two models like this and the second one will look cuter and sexier - this one i want to look a little strange. That said i have closed the eyelids a little.

Nicobertin - i love the 'working girl kind of thing, so thats what im gunna do. but set two models on a futuristic sidewalk with a curb crawling hovercar or something. ( Sounds great - but its gunna take me a while.:thumbsup:

[Chan]

Hmm... Very nice. The neck is too long. She looks like E.T. now. Make the neck shorter. Eyes a little smaller and remove the helmet. Looks like E.T. on a bike.

And do the tits vibrate?

[PaulCarry]

Sorry - no vibrating tits yet (but you knever know!)

Ok, so the scene will be a couple of robot 'working girls' at night on a futuristic, dystopian inner city suburb sidewalk. One leaning into a 'hovercar' touting for work and the other leaning up against a wall. (a bladerunneresque type scene). He he - ive got my work cut out! Anyway - heres the next update. This is the second girl robot. Shes a later production version with all 'mod cons'

Still havnt finished them yet (need lots more detail) this is just the base models. What ya think so far? c&c please.

[jhtanmy]

:p :p The character got big breast!!!!why so sexy?man!!!:eek: I think the design before one is more creative one!!!This one is more simple and normal!!!But good job!!!keep going!!!:applause:

[Chan]

The tits on the second one vibrate, right? Please...

Okay. Now to criticism. The face on the second one seems too mean. Everything else seems to be okay. And did you make the modifications that I suggested on the first one?
Hmh... The neck is too god damn long again...

By the way, jhtanmy, when you post, write the messages so that people understand. And sometimes use a point (is that how you say it?) in the end of a sentence not a ****ing exclamation mark.

[PaulCarry]

Originally posted by Chan
The tits on the second one vibrate, right? Please...

Okay. Now to criticism. The face on the second one seems too mean. Everything else seems to be okay. And did you make the modifications that I suggested on the first one?
Hmh... The neck is too god damn long again...

Hmm, yep i know what you mean - ill try to do something about making her face softer. Im also changing the first one as you said - will post more soon. Thanks.

[PaulCarry]

few more updates - ive added detail tgo the spine and legs plus put in the hands and cleaned up the arms (but theyre still looking a bit weird. Also checking out some colour schemes, but eventually ill texture it with maps.

[almog]

:applause: DUDE!!! ITS GREAT. The last 2 are Really really
good Butyfull!

i have no words...:xtreme:

[piajartist]

Nice silicone

[DJ Bindhi]

beautiful work, looks like an improved Hajime Sorayama.

[HieSpike]

very nice work.
Reminds me of void from Wildcats.

peace,
Kane
p.s. I like the directions your going better than the first post.

:buttrock:

[Nicobertlin]

I realy can feel your agony when you sit there at do all those tiny winy little details, and thing as usual screw up. But never the less you get them right where you need them.

Just needed to let you know

[Styxx]

Damn cool.

(ok, so I should post something better as my first post...)

[Frank Dodd]

Beautiful images, hollow robotic models with lots of internal detail allways impress m, especially when they are done with this level of detail and care and attention is paid to the metalic finish and environments. Great design and presentation, No real crits just keep it up :)

[Skyraider3D]

Excellently made and stunning metal effects! :thumbsup:

[Alice]

shouldnt a joy-bot have a tv and a pizzaowen buildt in?

[Alice]

forgot to comment on what a good job you´ve done there

[PaulCarry]

Originally posted by Alice
shouldnt a joy-bot have a tv and a pizzaowen buildt in?

S'pose it depends on what model you buy!:airguitar But im afraid that with these ones it doesnt come as standard.

Ive had some replies mentioning that as 'working girls' they are not that approachable. So ive softened them up a little and added some skin to make them more appealing to 'human' customers. Ive been playing around with color schemes again in my test renders but these are not set yet. Im still only about half way through modelling them.

Chan - Ive reduced the neck on the first one now, as you said. Im not sure how to make the face on the second one less mean. But ill go back to it before i finish.

heres the update.

[fleedawg]

Those are simply fantastic. I love the little intricate details. I hope to someday have the skill and patience to be able to do something like this. In the test render, they look very much "real", like they were actual toys or sculptures, rather than bits of data on a computer. Keep up the good work.

BTW, love the avatar. Scorpions are my favorite arachnid, and yours is just too cool.
:thumbsup:

[PaulCarry]

Thanks fleedawg. Found a little time to do some more on this. Ive now started playing with the textures even though i havnt finished the model! Ive still a few deatils to add in the upper body and arms. The textures are tests to see what works best UV maps or procedurals, but i still havnt got my procedurals sorted yet i think i need to add a few more incidence angles or something. Heres the testrenders:

(im only allowed 30k to upload here for some reason, which is no good, so heres a link to a bigger file:

http://www.central-industrial.co.uk/paulcarry/textest.jpg

http://www.central-industrial.co.uk/paulcarry/textest2.jpg

[PaulCarry]

another update - adding more detail to the chest area.

[PaulCarry]

Just started working on the scene that these bots will sit in - its a quick mock-up base model to get the composition right. But ive started to add detail in the banners and signs. The poo shaped things at the front will be the bots and the blue bubble will be a hover car thing.

[PaulCarry]

ok - well i hadnt done anything with this for ages and i decided to finish it off. i have totally rebuilt the scene from the ground up. I am still tweaking lighting and textures but its almost there - the final scene will have 2 Joybots in it!

here it is so far:

c & c welcome please

http://www.central-industrial.co.uk/paulcarry/joybot_mainscene1.jpg

[zzzrByte]

I like the new scene... And most of the joybot modeling... But I don't like her face. What are those things on the sides of her cheeks? they make her look scarred.

Also, it looks like you have a good texture mapped to her color, but nothing mapped to the specularity... It is especially noticable on her pants/arms, where the surface has obviously been worn down and perhaps even rusted but the specular reflection is completly smooth. Adding a specular map, and perhaps a slight bumpinesss will help it a lot!

And one last things, she has metal gloves! Some one, in some movie said that his idea of hell is "a hooker with cold hands"... Not exactly joyous.

Overall, good work... :thumbsup: Those were just a few things I thought I'd point out.

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