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Smokin
05-22-2006, 02:51 PM
Ive been admiring alot of the amazinf work here for quite some time, but have been very shy about posting. I do however would LOVE some feedback on some of my work and some advice on what i might need to work on. I know that'll take time, but gotta start somwhere right? Anyway here is prob the best i can do today, what you think?

http://mydigitalworkshop.com/Frontpage/girl.jpg

TheFirstAngel
05-22-2006, 02:55 PM
great work, clean and nicely executed. keep on going :)

Smokin
05-22-2006, 02:59 PM
2 more
http://mydigitalworkshop.com/Frontpage/Sophie.jpg

http://mydigitalworkshop.com/Frontpage/Sophie2.jpg

TheFirstAngel
05-22-2006, 03:02 PM
as for a bit a more precise review, seen from watchers point of view, here's 2 or 3 things i think could use a slight tweak.

the nose looks a bit hard defined on the left side where the tip faces the wing.
the left eye looks slightlyy bigger than the right eye. in general, the left side of her face looks like 5-10% bigger in scale.

the painting looks grerat at this stage, after the cleanout, it will be a fantastic work. keep it up!
solid technique by the way :)

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