Charicter: female: First High Poly head

[D7X]

She looks vaguely like a g/f of gollum :D
Good modelling but id say its a tad outstretched

[Thelios]

here are a few minor fixes.

[Thelios]

more updates, will have new ear by tomarrow, well now its off to bed. have early class tomarrow.:wavey:

[Thelios]

can someone direct me to a tutoreal for a high poly realistic ear?:D

[D7X]

looking better. I used to have an ear tut but i dont know where the hell it is on the web (or my hdd for that matter) try 3dtotal.com>>free stuff>>tutorials they have their own and loads of off site links to good tuts

[Thelios]

thx D7X

[Thelios]

here is another update with an ear, tell me what you think:thumbsup:

[Thelios]

here was a test for some eye lash's, tell me what you think?:bounce:

[Thelios]

Here it is The final head render. Time to start work on the body, Tell me what you think?:thumbsup: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[ill_logic]

it's coming out pretty nice man. sorry to point stuff out now, seeing how you want to move on, but i just came upon your post.
just a couple of things:
the forehead slopes a bit funny, like a bit too far forward, same with the jaw. also, the crease for the cheekbone looks a bit to sharp, the sculpt poly tool > smooth could easily fix that. as for the fur for the eye lashes, can you some how change the direction to shift it more towards the corners of the eyes?

the ear & ear placement look really good turned out really well! keep up the great work!

:surprised -ill

[Thelios]

Thx alot ill_logic, Better you tell me now then later, it is true that I do want to move on but better fix the problems before I move on.:thumbsup: Will work on thoughs now. :beer:

[Thelios]

This alittle better?:wavey:

[ThirdEye]

nice modeling, expecially the ear ;)

[Neil]

I'm amazed that your nose came out so good while it seems like you neglected proportions on the rest of the face.

Everything looks pretty good, expect you needa spend a couple days tweaking it. Don't worry, you got the hard part done. The top lip is too big, and the eyes are WAY too big for starters.

Fix those first, then lemme see it.

[Thelios]

Thx for the Reply ThirdEye_01, and Neil, I will get to work on the head probably tomarrow after class, BTW this is my first High Poly Female Head If no bodyknew that, anyway here is the start of the body (1hr) still need to do alot of tweeking (specialy the boobs). Tell me what yopu think:buttrock: :buttrock: :beer: :beer:

[Thelios]

Another Angle

[Thelios]

Another angle:bounce:

[ChrisG]

Its not bad at all! the only thing that realy struck me tough when I first saw it was that the eyes look a little big. of course I dont know if you are going for a more anime look, if so then never mind. Also, the lips look a tad flat and the crease on the upper lip is a little harsh. Other than that, looks good.:beer:

[gnarlycranium]

Ow! :surprised ...Okay, yeah, the boobs need work. They look like they've both been squished in from the sides, it's kinda scary. They shouldn't poke out that far, and they should look... like half-filled water baloons kinda resting on the slope of the ribcage. The distance between the upper part of the breast and the nipple should be much shorter than the distance between the nipple and the underside. Hope that makes sense.

[Thelios]

:thumbsup: thx for the imput ChrisG, I will work on the eyes tonight during lab. Grarly : that make perfict sense and I havent really worked on the boobs yet This is just the basic body puportions Have another week to tweek on the torso. lol I take my time (lazy:D) But thx alot for criting me, very helpfull.

[Thelios]

sorry Gnarly, spelled your name wrong, my mind types faster then my fingers.:hmm:

[Thelios]

errr its the other way around, fingers faster then my mind, bah I need more sleep. :beer: :beer: :beer: :beer: :beer: :beer:

[gnarlycranium]

GAH! I'm backwards too!! Hee hee-- and what a thing to have to explain over again!! The -underside- of the breast is not as much of a distance as the upper side... yeesh... http://pages.prodigy.net/rogerlori1/emoticons/bonk2.gif

[Thelios]

lol That makes more sense:thumbsup: , hows the mech comming Gnarly? looks good so far, I have the toy and it looks really close, great job:applause: :applause: :buttrock: :beer:

[gnarlycranium]

I haven't had much of a chance to work on the Eva yet, I went to the beach this weekend, but I ought to have an update soon! Thanks fer noticing!!

BTW-- love yer avatar, where's the rest of him?? :cool:

[Thelios]

Here is my update What do you think?:shrug:

[Thelios]

another angle

[Thelios]

A wireFrame :bounce:

[Thelios]

A quick Render of the new Abs:beer: What do you think?:shrug:

[Thelios]

lol my avatar was from one of my health classes, was just a picture of a smilly face, but I jazzed it up, I guess I could work on more today during my buisness class. Well at least get some concept art for this female (clothing/hardware) today, if any of it looks decent I will post it :P, well gotta go to class, have more updates tonight.:insane: :argh: :xtreme:

[Thelios]

now I have got the basic shape of the torso, Now comes the tweeking stage, anyway tell me what you think :wip: :buttrock: :bounce: :shrug:

[Alice]

it still feels like her jaw is far out there and the whole upper and lower jaw need to be pusched back a bit. Also the hips need some shaping and to be a bit bigger (looks male now)
But gj!

[Thelios]

here is an update with fixes and more geo. I cant think of a good name for her, anybody know any good ones?:shrug: tell me what you think

[ill_logic]

wow man!
it's come a long way! looking very nice!

the head looks a lot better now & the neck looks great. heh ass ain' too shabby either :thumbsup: !

only things i can really comment on are the hips still being a bit small & the upper body... the sides running down from the shoulders to the waist seems a bit to angular, like it tapers in towards the waist too sharply. but that's just me, maybe tweaking the hips will make it look better.

keep it up man!

:surprised -ill

[Thelios]

thx ill_logic, Yeah I was doing the extreems and tweeking out the details and flaws. But like everything there is always somthing that needs to be done. but will get on it as soon as I get some lunch. cheers:beer: :beer:

[gnarlycranium]

Her torso is much too narrow-- it looks good in relation to the hips, but not the shoulders, breasts, or head. Scale up everything from the armpits down, except the breasts, and you'll be in business.

And your avatar makes me think of a little cartoony samurai dude. :D

[Thelios]

:beer: :wip: :wip: :beer: :wip: :beer: :wip:

[Goon]

there seems to be the beginning of a seam:surprised... dont tell me your going to model in detail :applause:
oh. btw, real nice model.

[j9k_80]

Are you raising a toast to your own model because you think it deserves it or were you just bumping your thread again...hmmm.....

[fango]

LOL J9k !

feeling a bit grumpy today ? :P

[j9k_80]

Yeah...nothing cheers me up like being one of the only people in the lab sitting at a comp with a faulty backUPS and i haven't saved in an hour (my fault, i'm a dumbass)

Anyway, About the model, if you're looking for a name for her, how about CamelToe-Annie:surprised

[Drakmarr]

Well your progression on the piece has been positive, I especially loved it when you asked for a tutorial on an ear and then you come bustin back with a really nice looking set of ears :thumbsup: . Where did you eventually find that tutorial at?
But she is coming along you are doing real well, keep on it.

[Thelios]

thx for all the feed back,

Drakmarr: Someone emailed me or reminded me of a website I have been before, joan of arc tutorial, and has a really good well it was all very helpfull, here is the website. http://www.3dtotal.com/ffa/tutorials/max/joanofarc/joanmenu.asp

Goon: The "detail" down there is as far as I am going to go, but just adds more realism to her, if it hinders the project I can fix with a move of 3 verts:applause:

j9k_80: we all have thoughs moments. and how about no on the name. The thxs for trying. And yes it was to bumb my thread, plus I was board.

Anyway here is an update with a skin shader that my roomate (digital magi) found.

[ill_logic]

right on! it's coming along. looks good with that shader on it. i'd put a bit harsher slope into the hips so they look like they stick out further. but very nice

:surprised -ill

[Thelios]

thx ill

Will work really hard tomarrow to get the torso done by next week, Still alot of tweeking to do, but I really apreciate the feedback,

"feedback is fuel for the modeller"
-Thelios '03.:bowdown: :xtreme:

[Risibility]

give her a thick bush and maybe some crabs


-k im done...

[j9k_80]

lol- Risibility

Awww...Shucks, you're not gonna use the name? oh well, you're clearly a very talented artEst, so i'm sure you'll come up with a better one. :rolleyes:

and i was just kiddin bout the bumpin, I do it too if i'm not gettin any feedback.




Ooh, I got a better one: Camel toe Carrie?
No?

Linda Cameltoen? "No fate but what we make"

Camelina Jolie?

Cameltoe Anderson-Lee?

CaMella Toevovich?





Ok....I'm done.

[Thelios]

all I can say is wow you guys :rolleyes:

[Thelios]

here is an update with more work on: arms,boobs,and the butt, tell me what you think?:shrug: :wip: :wip:
http://www.pbase.com/image/11021721


-Josh.

[ntmonkey]

Hey Thelios,

Good job on the modeling. I love seeing how artist progress thanks to the feedback of others. By the way, where do you go to school?

Lu

[Thelios]

Fullsail

[ntmonkey]

Thelios,

Fullsail eh? That sounds familiar....wait....that's where I go to school. I'm currently taking Fundamentals of Logo animation and I'm having a hard time coming up with an idea. Meanwhile, I'll just watch your model progress. It looks really good so far. Keep up the good work!!

Lu

[Thelios]

ahh good ol FLA, does he still show my project in class, its the sword with the fairie, logo "bastard?":shrug: Yeah Ideas are hard,I am in A3D right now so I have a month to decide what I want to do for final project. You sould post some of your work people are very helpfull here. fellow fullsail student posts at www.3dsurfer.com .

-josh

[Thelios]

quick leg, now time to tweek the proportions::bounce:
http://www.pbase.com/image/11071136

[ntmonkey]

Josh,

I don't think I saw that one. We were short on time but I'm sure I'll dig it up on the FS website. I've posted on here and yes, thanks guys!! You've been very helpful. I can't wait to see the finished character. Keep on chuggin.

Lu

[Thelios]

then I guess Ill have a little lookzee at your work:beer:

[Thelios]

a update on the body, what do you think about basic proportions?:wip:
anyway time for sleep, have tomarrow off to work on her all day.
:beer: cheers

[Thelios]

here is a render of the knees, what do you think?:bounce:

[ill_logic]

hey there.
the inner thighs don't look round enough, especially up at the top. it makes her legs look spaced further apart too. other than that, :thumbsup:

:surprised -ill

[Thelios]

so the knee looks good?:thumbsup:

[Annuostivix]

:) hey, good job on all of the model. the inner thighs should be bigger, like someone else said i think. But i really like the head, and your ear turned out awesome. I can't wait to see you update it, later

[sonix]

Originally posted by Thelios
so the knee looks good?:thumbsup:

.:bounce:
Yeah man, nice touch modeling the backs of the knees. Are they going to have ligaments showing when bent, or not that detailed.

Whole project is awesome, can't wait for the next updates.

Sonix.

[Thelios]

as of now I only intend to model her, if I find extra time or after I graduate and have nothing but free time( if I dont find a job) then I will try my best at texturing her. then mabie a rig. lol I am not as scared to rig her as much as I am of textureing her.:thumbsup: anyway will see how far the road is :bounce:

[Thelios]

well been busy with my Animating class so havent had much time to advance on my female but now I am back on and thought she would look better with hair, so I did a basic poly 80's style mohawk. but am now going to do paint effect hair for more realistic effect, but will keep poly for other tests. :buttrock: :beer: :thumbsup:

[Thelios]

another but bigger.:thumbsup:

[Thelios]

Well here is another pic, trying my first paint effects hair and man is it a pain in the A$$. Guess it was just a bad hair day :D anyway, might toss the paint effects and do some good ol'poly textured plains. night:thumbsup:

[monkeysweat]

Hey I'm in A3D now too, small world. How did your mid-term go?
I like your chicks punk hairdoo. You still using nurb or is she polys?
Keep working at it.

[sonix]

The first hairstyle is much better. The modeled one rather than the paint FX ver.

She looks scary with all that scalp showing through.

Keep up the good work though.

Sonix

[strogoff]

man, she`s a beauty - you can`t give her those punkhair :-)
why not model the style you made with the paintfx?

[Thelios]

thx for the reply. good to hear feedback.:thumbsup:

Strogoff: I was planing on doing just as you say.

Sonix: This paint effects turned out really bad, plus my comp was being a letdown ( gonna get new one soon) I did another paint effect hair test that was dynamicly driven by softbodys. finished that one in hafe the time with much better results, so might try it again with my chick. but I am going to try all sorts of styles and hair types tell I find the one that looks the best and wasent a pain in the a$$.:buttrock: :beer:

monkeysweat:, it came out ok for how not into it I was. I really wasent feeling that project. hopefully the final turns out better. Plus I have to take CSE over again next month so am going to animate IK Joe doing some cool finalfantasy'ish rune fireball thingy. dident turn out to well on my hawk.:thumbsup:

Thx guys for replying and will have another update sometime in the next few days. :thumbsup:

[Thelios]

wow the next few days turned into about a week or so, got lazy and started playing Devil May Cry 2, Plus been working on Idea for my first portfolio:D worked on my chick every now and then, adding detail. still need to do hands and feet, might do them tomarrow during my special effects class. or at least start them, anybody have good reference? anyway what do you people think about the belly area, right now as we speak I am giving her a bigger Butt and working on proportions for the legs. anyway back to the Butt:beer:

[Thelios]

a closer image:thumbsup:

[sonix]

Very nice update.

Crits would be as you say bum size, and from the rear view, her wrists look a little too large.

Cheers for the close-ups.:)

I have a link for the reference images for hands and feet, will post as soon as I get home from work.

Sonix.

[Thelios]

yeah working on the bum now (bigger). thx for the upcomming link sonix, much apprecated:thumbsup:

[sonix]

Thelios,

This is the link, it will take you to the main page, but once there goto the 'Works' section then 'Final Fantasy movie'.

This will take you to a page of thumbnails with some hand images and head images. Just click on the image you want to view.

Take me there (http://www.digitalsculptor.net)

Hope this is the kind of thing you are after.

Sonix.

[Thelios]

lol I have that site in my favorites but totaly forgot about it. thx for makeing me remember:beer: well I have a few hrs before class starts, better get cracking. btw do you know an easy way to make a really good skin texture? I am not a texture artist. I have a long way to go but my goal is to work with square on one of there great games.:beer: So if anybody at square is reading this, I'm ready for the challenge:thumbsup:

[Thelios]

here is my start of my hand right now it is flat but just starting with virt placement will post one with depth soon, mabie tomarrow night.:thumbsup:

[Thelios]

here is an update and the end of the day for me, so what do you think, I know it is bad but it is just the start.:thumbsup: night:wavey:

[sonix]

Looking good. The little finger looks slightly out of proportion though, but this may be due to perspective view.


Are you using the images as textures too?

Sonix.

[Thelios]

I might as well use the texture too, its a damn good texture, alot better then I could ever do.:thumbsup:

[Thelios]

yeah this is only half of the hand I am starting the bottom half as I write this
:wip: :thumbsup:

[sonix]

Thelios,

are you using Max?

I'm just getting into it but have a small problem.

In my other 3d apps, I can select 2 veticies in a mesh and press the F key to create a face between the 2, but I can't seem to do this in MAx.

Can you help?

Sonix.

[Thelios]

sorry useing maya, is there a tool called append vertex?:shrug:
:beer: :beer: :beer: :beer: :beer: :airguitar :thumbsup:

[sonix]

Thelois,

I meant to find this link for you before, but have only yjust managed to find it again.

It's just another anatomy site, but a very good one.

I have had to stop modeling in MaxR3 due to it's limitations in the area I was asking you about, but thanks for helping me.

Another anatomy site (http://www.fineart.sk/)

Sonix.

[Thelios]

np, thx for the link, I have to take a break from modeling my female for alittle while due to class. but check out my project for that class, its the post about semi real poly demon guy.:beer:

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.