Jada and Shem, models for a piercing and tattoostudio (nudity)

[Numse]

Nice mate, this is going to be great. I know u have only began your work so there is no need for crits yet I think. The skin and lips are awesome

[EricCartman]

Nice but I think the upper lip's edge is too sharp.

[TheFirstAngel]

Numse: thanks mate :)



thanks eric, prolly will smove that loop that slightly out. its only an early shot of a lowpoly with 1 subdivision, was happy with the test so i thought i post it :)

[EricCartman]

It looks super sweet. Maybe you could post a wire?

[TheFirstAngel]

sure :) i'll post a screeny later today for you

[Micaoct]

Look really great. The eyelashes and the eyebrows might need some slight adjusting. The eyebrows look like they are flat on the face, probaly because its textures. The eyebrows look a little too cut off in the middle. Other then that and the lip it looks superb!

[TheFirstAngel]

http://www.angel3d.ch/content/3d/wip/jada_and_shem/Jada_01_wf_face.jpg

ok, sorry for the litrtle delay, i was moving so took ma a bit to get back to work. since this is a very early WIP, I didnt take care too much about the textures in general
here's a quick shot of the WF sdl 0, and as mentioned before, the texture only is a test :)

as for the lashes they only are texture atm, they will be modelled as usual at the end.

Back here later today hopefully with another update and thx for the nice feedback :)
cheers

[3dRaven]

Nice clean mesh so far. I'd sharpen up the specular on the eye though and give it a reflection map to give it more life

[calisto-lynn]

woooooow!!! she is sooo beautifuuuul!!!great work angel!!

[TheFirstAngel]

http://www.angel3d.ch/content/3d/wip/jada_and_shem/Jada_02_body_01a_mainvol.jpg

Ok, here's the start on her body, no ref yet to keep the speed up high. i'll keep the main level of details medium, not that i couldnt model it but i want the polycount bearable when i take it over to zbrush and avoid too highly concentrated areas.


3d Raven: yeah i'll try find a nice reflectionmap, preferly one where youcan clearly make out the photographer plus the neighbours gardendwarf in it ;) u know my oppinion on reflectionmaps already, since there isnt an environment in place, the raytracer has nothing to reflect YET.

Linda: thanks Red, glad ya like her :)

hehe, next upate later today. any c&c welcome as always.

[kmest]

nice job sacha specialy on the head...the body model looks god and clean at this moment..lets see what you will do on Zbrush:thumbsup:

[MichaelZHsee]

nice work mate~like everyone else have mentioned,the face is really welldone.clean and orderly topology,just a slight crit on her lower portion of her body,i think her thigh seems larger compared to her hip:Di'm sure u'll gonna fix that since this is only at the begining of the modeling stage.keep it coming sacha.

[TheFirstAngel]

hehe, yeah the inner muscles arent even defined yet on the legs, and the outer need a slight volume correction, agree. the bulge on the hips miught be caused from the 5 patch, as soon as the topology there is solved it should work :) I'll post an update later today and if not tomorrow morning. hehe, soccernight beer and fiesta :)=

[FlexGiddy]

looking good can't wait for updates.

Ed

[Giom]

Very nice face! Body anatomy still needs work - alot!

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