WIP, when masterchief undressed (not really nudity) ...

[Wongedan]

a little update here :

now Im doing some body, its still pretty rough btw ...
just to get the right propotion, it has to be a male, uh not so muscular btw...

http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/body2.jpg






and the wire :::

http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/bodywire.jpg

[hoodedpython]

Looks good, cant wait to see the finished model.

[DKR1138]

I personally think Master Cheif is extremely scared from war/battles, hense the reason he never takes off the mask all that much, even in safety.

[Wongedan]

@DKR1138
really? hehe. so thats why im gonna make him in berserk mode, he is out of his mind ... and kill anybody on his way

little updates, im not very sure for the collar bone, :(

I havent working that much on the back, and stretching the chest (the chest supposed to little bit stretched)... I ll make another updates soon...

http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/body3.jpg

and here is some wire (http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/wip.jpg)

[jesuisankit]

Hey Xvampire.. really cool leg mesh I see there of master chief... Hmm berserk master chief holding two SMGS, walking along the path of battlefield with a 100 convent body lying around....:thumbsup:... Yeah jus one thing I like to mention abut the leg armor.. as far as I remember Masters chief's armor the area between the thighs and legs, has some cloth kinda structure than the cylinders... well its completely ur choice to hav wht u like.. I hav jus pointed out the area in the image...

http://img458.imageshack.us/img458/4766/wireandrender8iy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Schoenrock]

damn the legs look amazing. i cant wait to see some updates

[morgangray]

Very cool, what will you be using for the render?

[Havoc89]

Wow, looks absolutely stunning. Cant wait to see more.

The only thing that troubles me is the calf armour. It seems a bit too tight.

[Wongedan]

hi,\\
@smooth criminal - hmm y its actually clothes rather than metal, hopefully im gonna fix it later.
@schoen rock - thx :)
@morgan gray - mental ray uh i think its my only choice .... hmm
@havoc89 - uh which part? (sorry for my poor vocab T)_T)


ok
this is my update on the torso (im working on the hand now)
not a major update, but I tried to add some little details here, and refining some muscles and flow

click this link please (http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/torsob.jpg)

I havent personalize this torso yet, its still a basic proportion, I ll go further after I finished the hand

thx, c&c are wellcome, dont hestitate to tell me if something not right ... :)

ps: i have some other image shot from the back, but there is some error in my bloody ftp T_T

[jesuisankit]

I seriously dont know why they hav given cloth like structure in that area.. may be to make master chief more comfortable and give him some fluency in his movements. I jus got these low poly pics which might help you...

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/237/clipboard014ty.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/3079/clipboard029kb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Wongedan]

hi this is my final torso (and hand)
what do you think?

http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/torso/finaltorso5.jpg

other shots :
back (http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/torso/finaltorso4.jpg)
hand
(http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/torso/final_torso1.jpg)armpit
(http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/torso/finaltorso2.jpg)side (http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/torso/finaltorso6.jpg)
wire (http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/torso/finaltorso3.jpg)
Im going to work on the head soon,

crits and comments always welcome ^^

[Womball]

The body looks awesome! Just watch the mirrored areas in regards to the forearm veins. Veins tend to vary a lot from arm to arm.

[Rebeccak]

xvampire,

I am sorry I was not able to get to your thread sooner, but it looks like you have a lot of terrific work here! :)

My main suggestion for upper body model is to make the lower arms a bit less slender and long, they seem a bit disproportionate to the rest of the arm and the torso. Slim the arm at a slightly more gradual rate, it seems to become thin abruptly in the middle of the lower arm and tapers directly into the wrist. Otherwise I would say that things are looking in really good shape. Thank you for inviting me to your thread. :)

Cheers,

~Rebeccak

[}-{obbes]

I seriously dont know why they hav given cloth like structure in that area.. may be to make master chief more comfortable and give him some fluency in his movements. I jus got these low poly pics which might help you...

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Its so he can actually bend his legs.......human body parts dont tend to move well when they can't bend..............

[Digital_Rebellion]

Excellent control over modeling:scream: Neatly done. 5 stars for ya!:thumbsup:

[Wongedan]

head WIP added :bounce:

http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/head/endascok.jpg


WIRE here (http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/head/endascok_wire.jpg)

[cb43569]

Interesting. The head looks a bit strange in the middle, like a seam, or something. You using a symettry object?

[jesuisankit]

thanks for clearing that out hobbes....

The updates are comming along nicely man.... you are going to do more tweaking around the lips area rite?

[Wongedan]

some updates ....

http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/head/closeuphead.jpg



http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/head/body.jpg




I just try to attach it on the leg and give some shirt ..... (color is jjust paint over in photoshop )

http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/head/fullattach.jpg

and some

WIRE frame (http://student.vfs.com/%7E3d60arif/masterchief_wip/head/wirehead2.jpg) -- as you can see my wire frame is not that even for now ... ^^

[Wongedan]

@digital rebelion - (thanks :) )
@cb43569 - yes, its a seperated object.
@smooth criminal - thanks dude, just for now I try to attach everything first,just to see the proportion.
Im gonna detach the head later .. to fix it :)

[KOKE]

HI dude,

I really like the legs but not so much the torso.

Check your proportion as you have a problem there (either grow the legs or shrink the torso).

always use reference, even if you are modeling separate pieces.
Proportions and silhoute are key.

The face is suffering from "fish lips" (lol I had the same problem when I started modeling humans).
So pull the corners of the mouth inside a bit, to make it feel more natural.

Im sure the chief is a really tough guy, so I would give him a thick square jaw but without forgeting the chin.
He needs a better defined chin.

I would also define better the clavicle the abs and the brows.
The brow area will give him much more personality.

Keep going man.

:D

3d59jorge.

JK.

[Wongedan]

hey, thanks man !!!



Im gonna try my best in the rest of the time I have (after presentation) to fix this stuff . :argh::banghead:

[DannyU]

whats your reference for the armour look like?

[rufsketch1]

wow, absolutely great! but i agree about the proportions, the body needs to be smaller. no actual modelling work, just scaling should do it.

[overcontrast]

awesome stuff goin on the futuristic leg armor... but cant really say the same abt the upper organic part... it needs a lot of work IMO. The Torso is too big compared to the legs.... the proportion should be like so: from the tip of the head to the base of the crutch should be the same from crutch to the feet, and, the length from one hand's middle finger to the other hand's middle finger while the arms aare spread apart should be the same as the character's height.
Hope that helps... m waiting to see some amazing stuff from ya pal..... keep it up;) :thumbsup:

[DrJZoidberg]

The legs are too short. ;)

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