Wila, Michał Gamrat (3D)

[DarkEdge]

well, here i go:
the shading/shadowing on the girl is beautiful, very well done and looks great too! the texturing on the trees looks good as well, though the leaves look a little fake. the grass is well made but again the coloring makes it look a little fake as well, maybe the green is too saturated???

the ground/dirt does nothing for me (looks like something i would make...lol!) and the sky is poorly done (imo). possibly the sky is too busy, you don't want to detract the eyefrom the lovely lady.

some may say that the posture of the girl is awkward but i say it fits with what you are trying to say.

good work and keep it up!:)

[Darkseal]

For me it is just the opposite. I think everything in the scene (including the dirt) looks great, but it is the pose of the girl that looks unnatural. It's just a bit off. She seems to float, and the arms and hands have no fluidity to them to suggest movment like walking. Don't get me wrong, she looks great as a model, just think the pose is off. Everything else looks good. Keep up the good work!:scream:

I love the textures on your other pic "the Gate"

[BlockMind]

She is not floating I think but the pose has potential to it. I don't know if this suggestion makes you a sense but I suggest you to represent this charming goddess with floating above a little puddle of water with just left foot thumb of her is touching and caused a little wavelet on water.

On the other hand, I couldn't see the shadow of lady on the ground. I think it makes all that floating feeling.

Except this, I like the work. Scene is not realistic but gives fairy tale atmosphere greatly. Modeling is great too! Good work...

[ap3pilot]

All in all this is a great attempt, its not a realistic image but you have done well

The Grass, Ground, Dirt, Trees look good, the area behind her back needs a bit more illumination

The background image is a little strange, looks like a purple cloud? Go a nice Blue Sky with white clouds

The model of the girl has good proportions, the hips, legs and head look good, but the front ankle looks a bit "Dinted" and better lighting is required on her.

With the dress have a white more glowing colour to it rather than a grey flat colour.

Her arms & hands should mabey have a more relaxed pose to them.

Otherwise great work and keep at it:thumbsup:

[MartaWysocka]

Miła Wiła :)

Good composition. Specially I like this tree on the first plane. But you should keep one style in entire work. Wiła looks more realistic, those shadows are beautiful, but there is no any shadow under her feet! That why, I think, she looks like flayng. So do more realistic enviroment or, if you prefere, you can stylise Wiła, something like in games or moovie for children. Anyway, this pic is good - I don't know how to say in English - dobry punkt wyjścia do dalszej pracy http://forums.cgsociety.org/images/icons/icon7.gif

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