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mc2_mc2
05-21-2006, 10:07 AM
Hello everyone. I'm mc2 and I'm 16

This is a painting I have been working on and after thinking about, I decided to post it here. I have always been intimidated by all the pros on these forums which causes me not to post here lol.

Anyway it started off as a doodle, but then i decided to base it of wendy from peter pan flying in the sky.

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/7615/flying2260dpi0ao.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Any C&C will be appreciated

Thanks!

secretasianman
05-21-2006, 03:00 PM
don't get intimidated. there are alot of people here that are like you. there are also alot of people that will sit and look and help out, although i came in and i was about to say something more on the line offunny about your drawing.



ok i am getting the wise crack out of the way. she looks high and that she can't get up or just keeps stumbleing.

now it doesn't matter that age you are, but you do have a good start.

left arm looks almost like it has no place where it bends and it just bends irregularly.


ya need to work on your anatomy especially on the legs.

did you sketch it our first or just use color? going back looking at people and postures would help. sitting down and sketching would be a biggie to.

need more color tones.

mc2_mc2
05-22-2006, 05:35 AM
yea...you're right about the arms and legs haha. I also see wat you mean about her being high :D. I should restart the whole thing with i proper drawing this time...i just started colouring it in PS.

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