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01-08-2003, 05:22 AM

Hi,
I'm planning on makin some work for my portfolio and decided that it would be easy but interesting to make a sentinel (from x-men) I drew up the front and side view of the character and need some critiques. I've already been told to take out the lips and just put the slit or boxshaped mouth. tell me what you think?:D

Joviex

01-08-2003, 05:37 AM

I think you should not double post. :)

and it looks good.

01-08-2003, 05:41 AM

sorry it was my first time posting, i pressed back and i guess it reposted? if that's possible otherwise i have no idea how to got up there

01-08-2003, 11:53 AM

Please any comment on this. If its boring tell me. if the drawing sucks tell me. ill take any critisism. If using the sentinel in porfolio work makes me look as though i have no imagination, let me know.

shoey

01-08-2003, 12:12 PM

theres not really much to crit at the mo. i think that you might want to take your scan into photoshop and line up the features with guide line as its not quite lined up. also the straight on view isn't straight so you could rotate that and sort it out. get an update in:bounce:

01-08-2003, 03:10 PM

I redrew the sentinel with more of a prosthetic look to him, less human. I lined up the grids and its not as slanted before. Is there anything you like or dislike? What would you do differently? Don't be affraid to tell me the truth about what you think. Is there not enough detail? :shrug:

Remi

01-08-2003, 03:37 PM

You can delete a post...just click on the edit tab and then the delete post option on the top of the next page...:)

01-08-2003, 03:41 PM

Thanx Remi:thumbsup:

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