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nicolapsia
05-18-2006, 09:28 AM
hi,
I am pretty new in drawing so I thought it would be helpful to listen some advices. feel free to comment and critique please

thanks,
elif

here is my works:
http://pg.photos.yahoo.com/ph/nicolapsy/album?.dir=/b49fre2&.src=ph&.tok=ph7St4EB8VrxOcZm

frostblade
05-18-2006, 10:31 AM
I'm not sure but it looks like your drawings are rather small but scanned in really large. Maybe try drawing bigger.

Your figures are quite stylised...so I'm not sure what to say with them.

Anyways reading and attending life drawing classes will do wonders I heard.

Journey of an Absolute Rookie: Paintings and Sketches (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=870&pp=60)
I get so inspired by it myself.


He went from
http://www.mindcandyman.com/jons_uploads/Drawing10_Trees.jpg

To
http://www.jonathanhardesty.com/monica_portrait_step3_final.jpg

nicolapsia
05-18-2006, 11:13 AM
thank you very much linda,

yes you are right for some of my drawings ,they are really small but the avarage is A4 size.
Do you mean stylized in the sense that actual protportions or brush strokes are hidden so judging is hard? or ?
and thanks for sparing time for writing..

secretasianman
05-18-2006, 12:06 PM
the thing i see is that you need to work on your proportions and basic body anatomy.

can't break it all down right now i got to go to work.

MattVogt
05-18-2006, 07:03 PM
My favorite piece is the mom with the neck extender. Looks like you've even thumbnailed some silhouettes. Yeah that concept art forum has some great examples of how people progress. Also I'd highly recommend you visit Kimmel's workshops on lifedrawing here at cgtalk. explore here (http://forums.cgsociety.org/forumdisplay.php?f=177)

enjoy the journey, make drawing a habit

aldog
05-18-2006, 07:23 PM
my favorites are the animals, they're very cute.
For the other ones I would suggest looking through the anatomy threads here at cgtalk. they can be a great help

howlinghorse
05-18-2006, 10:33 PM
I like your sketches, the style shows a lot of liveliness. 'Esek' is very nice! Keep drawing and see where it takes you... :)

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