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cuddlesmcsavage
05-17-2006, 08:35 PM
Here's the newly scanned line-art for my next painting. Just thought I'd start the post now, and see what you all think! Critique away!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v352/chrismaz/versus.jpg

cuddlesmcsavage
05-19-2006, 09:08 PM
i started painting, and here is what i've got thus far, i need advice on the background buildings! help!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v352/chrismaz/versusWIP.jpg

PS, it's very dark on the lab computer i'm on right now, so i hope its not too dark for you guys...

eishiya
05-19-2006, 09:41 PM
Perhaps a little bit of lightening would be good, especially on the upper part of the sky. I think this looks pretty good so far, but it'd be nice if you posted a larger version. As for those buildings... I think they're cool, but maybe you could make them vary in thickness (unless you're going for identical architecture), or at least make a few get smaller as they get further away. Right now, they look like a half-broken fence.

cuddlesmcsavage
05-28-2006, 10:18 PM
i was actually thinking of putting lightening effects around the machine, we'll see how it goes. and i agree with you on the city, i need to work on it....

malcon
05-28-2006, 10:38 PM
i started painting, and here is what i've got thus far, i need advice on the background buildings! help!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v352/chrismaz/versusWIP.jpg

PS, it's very dark on the lab computer i'm on right now, so i hope its not too dark for you guys...
computer labs are you losers lik you.... ok im just kidding chris. the sky looks cool man.
oh yeah!

cuddlesmcsavage
05-30-2006, 04:46 AM
latest update:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v352/chrismaz/versusWIP2.jpg

cuddlesmcsavage
05-31-2006, 08:04 PM
i don't deem this good enough for my main folio, but would like comments all the same. SOMEONE PLEASE CRITIQUE ME!!! ARGH!!!http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v352/chrismaz/versusfinal.jpg

offbeatworlds
05-31-2006, 08:07 PM
I think it would be easier to critique if I could see a larger version. It's hard to see much but color when the image is this small. :)

bonkanailios
05-31-2006, 08:12 PM
what she said.

buut, from your initial drawing I thought (to be blunt) this was amature work. but then the colors came in and all of a sudden your stuff took flight, I am loving the improvements your making as your going along.

Edit: also try out the focused critic at conceptart.org they are BRUTAL.

cuddlesmcsavage
05-31-2006, 08:18 PM
for some reason photobucket is posting it as half the size....

i have it posted here thought too ----> http://www.deviantart.com/view/34092878/

aldog
06-01-2006, 02:57 AM
Simply beautiful, I love it, i didn't look at your concept sketch so seeing a person in there was quite a suprise, but it looks very good.
the only thing I would critique is that the back of the mans knee (the legpit?) looks weird, it almost looks like a bone sticking out. maybe just fade that area a little more.

offbeatworlds
06-01-2006, 03:32 AM
Well, this looks really good! I love the concept, and your coloring is really good. One of the things that bugs me though is the size of the character's head. It's too small. The head should be half the wide of the shoulders, and right now it looks about a third. Try to remember those proportions! :thumbsup:

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