still: The house at the end of morning(the mushroomhouse from the wip forum)

[spr0g]

looks nice, noticed two things straight away.... the hill in foreground falls off too quickly... needs to be a hill... not a cliff (picture)
and the only yellow light source doesn't look like it should be casting that much light... only a little flam, and the flame wouldn't reach the top of the shroom!

other than that its cool

[coCoKNIght]

looks like a tranquil and comfortable place to stay :)

[HieSpike]

look very nice....
could use some more work on foreground grass and flowers...they look like paint effects.


overall....sweeet!!

peace,
Kane

[bjotto]

spr0g:
ehh, the mushroom is yellow so why shouldn't it be yellow I'm pretty happy with the hill.

HieSpike: yeah I know it kind of does but I don't know how it could look otherwise to fit the style of the image, and I think it works pretty well

[cuse]

i dont think theres any crits really... would like a bigger render if pos :)

hehe, but think this looks great! anyway, good job.\



cuse

[swee]

Very nice image indeed. the hill is nice and light should stay that way.. Good Work! =)


:thumbsup:

[spr0g]

ok, so the mushroom is yellow... my mistake, but would a cangle really be creating THAT much light? think about it, you may wanna add some more candles or summit... just strikes me as odd

[Bliz]

It looks great. It's got a bit of that Terry Gillian look to it.

If it was my piece I'd just finish it off with a couple of black crows hovering in the distance over the valley. That would just enhance the latent menace already present and add a touch of 'story' or 'plot' for the viewer to ponder over.

But that's great - Well Done :thumbsup:

[Remi]

I agree with Bliz...something in the backround would add alot to the image...and the lighting is just fine.....don't forget this is outdoors and theres more light than just the candle...ambient light too...very well done...just add some birds in the backround r whatever and call it done...good job:thumbsup:

[bjotto]

cuse: even bigger, isn't 1280x960 big enough?
spr0g: as remi said that thing is outdoors, the sky will light it pretty well
Bliz and Remi: Great Idea, I'll probably do that

[cuse]

well im running 1920x1200 and when i resize it in ps it looks crappy... so no its not big enough :) unless you wanna zoom out a little as well or something :) your choice, thank you, hehe...


cuse

[bjotto]

holy crap, that's big, well I'll try atleast

[cuse]

haha, thanks - actually im running 3840x1200 really (x2 23")

:)



cuse

[coCoKNIght]

Aaargh, stop this talk 'bout super screens, I'm gonna kill someone...
*peng* *peng*
... hmm, doesn't feel better...

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