Bmw m3 custom, Nemanja Obradovic (3D)

[DeeZeL]

Well the modelling is excellent, yet i am not comfortable with the fact that the bmw lies in...well i call it a 'dead spot' in the composition.

[bitBrain]

I didn't have any problem with the composition, looked ok to me :) It's simply as if someone stood by the road and filmed a car going by.

Motion blurring both the car and the background makes it look like the camera is speeding into the picture att 200km/h :) If the camera is filming normally (i.e. not zooming about) the background should be steady, the car should have motion blur in the direction it's going, and the wheels should have radial motion blur too, because they are spinning.

Maybe you did motion blur in Photoshop? How about doing a simple animation and rendering 1 frame with motion blur on? ;)

Good model and lighting, good luck! :)

[Eclectic]

Beside irregular moting blur, everything is excellent! :thumbsup:
Well done!

[F10]

Very nicely done.

You're missing a driver however.

[rdias1972]

Very good works..congratulations..4 stars..

[X-Ice]

hmm shader are pretty good, composing is not perfect but veryy good :) The Modeling is good but little bit too smoth... I don't like the photoshop effect ><

but dude...


3stars from me!!

[childplay]

Desi Nemanja,

sorry,,,joke


nice model. But must say that I agree with bitBrain. If you change anything, can't wait to see the results on new one.


all the best

[ap3pilot]

The Image Looks Really Good:thumbsup:

I agree with bitbrain, just fix your motion blur

The lighting and composition is excellent

[Per-Anders]

the perspectives don't appear to match, either that or it's a really long and thin car and the road camber is extreme.

the model looks good, but work on the compositing side of things a bit more, especially the shadows, and reducing the more obviously photoshopped elements (blurs that don't quite match etc).

[Arrrgh4life]

Very nicely done.

You're missing a driver however.

No he's not silly, take a closer look:)

[lagatta]

great modelling job, the only critic i got: it looks like there is no glas in the frontlights. There could be some more details or reflections. And maybe you should use a dirtmap to get some more sharpness and depth to your car geometrie. :)

[mp5]

nice compose!
...
But I think, that reflactions on the car must be more blur.

[KaaZoo]

very good work
i love that motion blur

:thumbsup: ****

[aliismail]

good work, I agree with all the above
but the front spoiler screams BOX MODELING, it needs fixing

[djorzgul]

good work. fix the motionBlur.
respect.

[living_for_cg]

nice work :).I also like to see the car modeling and wire.

[3D-generik]

E, Nemanja, svaka cast, razvalio si ga. M blur je perfektan......pusti ove papane, nemaju pojma!

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