Character: SoulStar

[grendizer]

WOW! Nice picture! What did you model the woman with?
I like your avatar too. :scream:

[Rhid1en]

It's a nice image, but I don't think you should stick it into the "final" pile just yet. I'm a big fan of high contrast lighting, but I think you need to work a bit more on your scheme. I'm guessing by her outfit, or lack of, you want her to be somewhat sexy, I'd add a rim light off her ass to define that sensual curve more. Her breasts look a bit strange as well as her rib cage. Maybe try pushing the ribs up a little and adding some gravity to the breast? The monster with her looks pretty cool, but it's hard to see what's going on with it's head, maybe some backlighting to bring out more of it's surface structure? One other thing that kind of stands out to me is the mud/dirt surface they're on, looks pretty plastic, I'd create a spec map to add some variation to the shininess levels of it. Some other compostion posibilities with the characters might be fun to play with too.

[melmann]

Wow! Very nice! How long did it take? Great piece!
Peece,
Mel

[bilbo3d]

I agree w/ Rhid1en, especially about the mud. Take the background out of focus, maybe add a little fog over the water, and it will feel more like an environment.

All that said, this rocks! Great work on the modelling! :thumbsup:

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