Female (Adult content) - Help with head needed

[orangefisk]

Just another render of the head:

http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/20b.jpg

[kukukiki74]

The breast maybe needs little spreading... It looks as if they are squeezed by two hands on the side... It looks little unnatural.

[shoey]

hey, kevin. really good start mate, but i think part of the problem with the head lies in the jaw and chin area. they seem to be a bit strong for a woman. a woman's chin and jaw is more pointy than a male's, i'll try to dig up a ref for you. keep up the good work tho:bounce:

[orangefisk]

@kukukiki74
I don't know, maybe you're right - i'll give them a little workover for tomorrows update.

@shoey
Heya! Yup - just can't make the jaws right. Didn't have any reference pics either. (No internet connection at home) So I would appreciate if you had some reference pics :wip:

[orangefisk]

And here's an update for that shit!

http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/20d.jpg

http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/20e.jpg

Wire
http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/20wire.jpg

[MCGrund]

hey orangefisk,
I think there's something wrong with her leg proportions. Shouldn't the thighs be at least a bit thicker than the lower legs?

[orangefisk]

Yup - you're right. I think i was getting blind on the character in the end. I'll make those legs done for tomorrow - but thanx for pointing out. :thumbsup:

Noone else with some critique or comments?

[ivanimal]

I think you need some reference pictures

[shoey]

hey kev, nice update, still need to work on the head a bit though. do you want her to have spock ears cos they're a bit pointy. anyway... as for the body, don't know if you've seen this or if it will help but you can check it out for proportions.

woman (http://www.cookercare.demon.co.uk/Art/page27.gif)

[orangefisk]

Thanx shoey! I actually visited that homepage yesterday - but I didn't see that one! The reference is perfect! You also got some face reference pictures?

In fact i'm going for the elven approach - therefor the pointy ears...

[shoey]

have you tried http://fineart.sk/index.html for face refs?

[orangefisk]

You make me a happy man Shoey! :applause:
Thanx alot!

[shoey]

no probs at all, now lets see an update:bounce:

[Null_Object]

Hmm I'm thinking the buttocks is not to the right proportion can I plz get a zoom up on the buttocks so we can critque it further?:)

[orangefisk]

Made a lot of adjustments on the face. Tell me what you think [:D]

http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/21b.jpg

Another lineup:
http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/21a.jpg

Wire:
http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/21.jpg

[orangefisk]

Lovely artists - comon, there must be something to critique... :love:

[shoey]

Good update kev, thats heads coming along very nicely. still needs some work on the ear tho. keep it up:bounce:

[Fused]

i understand the cartoonish feel, though i would still scale down the eyes a bit and pull them in a weeeee bit closer together. this may make an odd gap on the side of the skull then possibly pull in the sides to compensate. i feel this would enhance the propotions of the head and facial features.

keep up the nice progress

[twitchy]

the space between the eyes needs to be the width of her nose.
ears look okay. make the lips more fuller to get the model feeling.

[pit]

The neck is far to thin - even for a comic-like character. Giv ikke op, du er der næsten!

[orangefisk]

Heya guys! Sure, i'll try making an update for tomorrow. But everytime i start on this model again it is ending up very weird... Thanx for the comments though

[orangefisk]

Back to the beginning... Hello people. I would appreciate if some of you smart guys could tell me where the problems in this heads proportions is. I just can't figure it out. Everytime I modify the head further, it just gets *****d up...

-Please help-

http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/22.jpg


I've also tried to unwrap this girly, never done that before. Is there anything I should be aware of in the unwrapping/texturing process, and are there any good tuts out there for makin' a realistic skin in photoshop?

:bounce:

[orangefisk]

Btw. unwrapping status:
http://www.orangefisk.com/3d_files/unwrap.gif

[MCGrund]

OK, one thing before I start. Im not one of the smart guys. I'm dumb as dumb can be. So beware, anything I say might be wrong.
:eek:
I took your Image and messed around a bit. I think it looks better now, though still a bit weird. Here is what I did:
1. moved the neck to the front.
2. moved the space between nose and upper lip to the front.
3. rounded the forehead and pulled out the brow a bit.

http://public.rz.fh-wolfenbuettel.de/~grund/cgtalk/head suggestion.jpg

I think the upper lip looks a bit strange and you could also round up the back of the head.
Now let's wait what the smart ones are going to say.
:curious:

[-op-]

the ears might need some work. they look much to simple.

[mmwizard]

Hi,

I think you're doing fine for now. My experience is that you always need a good reference image for the front and the side of the face. If you can't draw it yourself look for some anatomic drawings on the net or in the library. scale them proper and you will have a great strart. So you don't need to adjust you're model to much later on.

Altering high res. models is an pain in the ... If you change one thing u have to alter another ..., ..., ... .

Bud for now i would do something on the eyes.
"The distance between the eyes is one eye from corner to corner"
And they need to be in the center of the head. and bla bla bla

look up the rules for human head design...
grtz,

MMwizard

[luigi]

th head have uncorrected proportions

the best idea for me is have reference image.

this tutorial is the best i have seen in modelling face

arild wiro head tutorial (http://www.secondreality.ch/)

enter in tutorial section

this head will be perfect for help you in references

and you have tehe mr02 tutoials too

http://mr2k.3dvf.com


continue working :wip:

what kind of face do you want to do?

younger or older face

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