crits please

[bumskee]

hey there...

just a sketch right???i am no expert but, i think u have a proportion thingie happening here...
the chick behind.. her leg is sorta in between the guys hand and the knee..(and her fist is on the guys shoulder) but she's so small all of a sudden.. maybe u should draw her to the proportion related to the guy.. and her fist is too wide..looks like she's got 7 fingers! and she's ugly..:p


hope to see the finished work!!

[Dampire]

a ok thanks... but the draw is supouse that the girl is smaller than the guy .. sort of giant... ok ... that is why the pouse.. and the leg..

sorry for my english I wope to make me explain

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