Gremlin flying Machine

[maartenw3d]

looooooool this gremlin stuff off urs is very good..
u got ur own "smurfs" thingy going on there =)

[Hyptosis]

hehe, tnx, I need to draw the badguys now. Not nearly as 'cute'

[puddlefish]

you have a nice sense of detail, but there are some problems.

your perspective is off, especially noticable on the machine itself (because it's a geometric form).

also, the scale of your gremlins is a little arbitrary. and they seem a little 'pasted on' the environment, as opposed to being part of it, and interacting with it and each other.

lastly, there is little sense of depth in the drawing, through line weight and volume shading you can learn to create a convincing sense of depth in your drawings. you've touched on it a little with the line weights on the machine itself, and some of the foreground characters, but it needs to be more controled.

i would recommend you take a look at a good book on drawing technique, the basic talent is there, but you need to study the details and specifics of your medium.

hope this helps.

[cuse]

haha great! love the weird perspective on the flying machine, but i do agree with puddlefish, altho its a nice 'look' it doesnt really have depth... but theres a lot of detail in the grain of the wood compared to the gremlins, would like to see those buggers a little more :)

but then again it is a concept, so... good work



cuse

[Hyptosis]

Awesome, tnx a ton guys, I'll try to work on that imdediatly.

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