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05-11-2006, 09:45 PM
Here's my new character. I've sketched him quite a while ago actually, and I'm already quite far with the model (cause i was too lazy too post them :blush: ), but i'll post thse pictures later.
Here are the sketches i use:
Let me hear what you think....
05-11-2006, 10:14 PM
And here they are, some early modelling pics:
At this stage I couldn't resist to throw on a quick sss-shader (I forgot to adjust the eyes, so they turned out black):
And one with a alternative colour, just fooling around to see what works best.
05-14-2006, 01:17 PM
you can't tell me you've got nothing to crit, it aint that good.
I can really use some comments on the feet and back.
So here are some wires for you, so you can get a better look.
05-18-2006, 03:58 PM
hey there, good start with the model. from the first post it seems like it's a little boxy and could use a couple more organic "roundness" here and there. Also try and see if you can clean up your 5 sideds in the feet. those might cause a problem when animating or posing this guy later. hope this helps.
05-19-2006, 09:34 AM
Yay, :bounce: finally a reply!...
BlueNyte - You're right about those feet, they need a lot more work. This is only a roughed out shape, to get the proportions right. I also need to refine his ankles so i think i can get much of those fives out then.
Could you be a little more specific out where it looks boxy, I know his head should be a bit rounder (i think I already fixed that a bit in the last render), but what other places are there?
Thanks for looking.
I'll try to post a big update this weekend...
05-19-2006, 09:45 AM
05-19-2006, 10:04 AM
Yeah, well I spose he could be Yoda's big brother, or his son maybe :)
05-19-2006, 02:09 PM
very interesting Goblin, I like the sketch, it reminds me a mummy a bit, oh yeah - Yoda's mummy
keep up the good work :wip:
05-19-2006, 06:01 PM
the places where it seems a little boxy are in the turning points of the legs. like if you draw a line stright down from the Illiad's Crest (hope i'm spelling this right) all the way down to his foot it seems that you have a bevel or crease happening there and also the corresponding "edges". It's mostly noticeable in the lower leg. I hope this helps.
06-29-2006, 08:24 PM
It's been a while, cause i've been really busy with school and more boring stuff.
But holiday is just around the corner, so I hope I can finish this guy in the next weeks.
But i did have some time to fix the legs, (feet still need work though), and I made his mouth and teeth.
So let me now what you think...
06-29-2006, 08:24 PM
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