Goblin WIP

[tommie82]

And here they are, some early modelling pics:

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/goblin_1.jpg

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/goblin_2.jpg


At this stage I couldn't resist to throw on a quick sss-shader (I forgot to adjust the eyes, so they turned out black):

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/goblin_sss.jpg

And one with a alternative colour, just fooling around to see what works best.

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/goblin_sss2.jpg

[tommie82]

C'mon guys,
you can't tell me you've got nothing to crit, it aint that good.
I can really use some comments on the feet and back.
So here are some wires for you, so you can get a better look.

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/head_wire.jpg

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/full_wire.jpg

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/hands_wire.jpg

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/feet_wire.jpg

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/back_wire.jpg

[BlueNyte]

hey there, good start with the model. from the first post it seems like it's a little boxy and could use a couple more organic "roundness" here and there. Also try and see if you can clean up your 5 sideds in the feet. those might cause a problem when animating or posing this guy later. hope this helps.

[tommie82]

Yay, :bounce: finally a reply!...

BlueNyte - You're right about those feet, they need a lot more work. This is only a roughed out shape, to get the proportions right. I also need to refine his ankles so i think i can get much of those fives out then.
Could you be a little more specific out where it looks boxy, I know his head should be a bit rounder (i think I already fixed that a bit in the last render), but what other places are there?

Thanks for looking.

I'll try to post a big update this weekend...

[xtremist999]

...Yoda~! :D

[tommie82]

LOL :beer:
Yeah, well I spose he could be Yoda's big brother, or his son maybe :)

[Leshiy3d]

very interesting Goblin, I like the sketch, it reminds me a mummy a bit, oh yeah - Yoda's mummy
keep up the good work :wip:

[BlueNyte]

the places where it seems a little boxy are in the turning points of the legs. like if you draw a line stright down from the Illiad's Crest (hope i'm spelling this right) all the way down to his foot it seems that you have a bevel or crease happening there and also the corresponding "edges". It's mostly noticeable in the lower leg. I hope this helps.

[tommie82]

Hi guys,

It's been a while, cause i've been really busy with school and more boring stuff.
But holiday is just around the corner, so I hope I can finish this guy in the next weeks.

But i did have some time to fix the legs, (feet still need work though), and I made his mouth and teeth.

http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/goblin_legs.jpg


http://www.4thdimension-animation.com/forums/goblin_teeth.jpg

So let me now what you think...

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