Living room interior, Andre Ferwerda (3D)

[MAB991]

nice work i like it , lighting is good and modeling is very good :thumbsup:

[Cowboy3D]

It's a realy good work man..:). Although i've got a feeling that you can improve your lighting.
It will seem more realistic. What do you say?

[Andre]

Lightning is always an isue haha There is some overbright area in the left upper corner, but it dosn't missfit the image.. I think :D

thnx for your reply's

[Cowboy3D]

ok.... How about a wireframe?

[Andre]

Here you go:

http://members.home.nl/a.ferwerda/wire2.jpg

[Cowboy3D]

thanks man. Keep up the good work please..:)

[KurtS]

nice work!
2 minor things: the 4 plants are identical - makes it look a bit to artificial, and maybe the dark wood is a bit to dark

[Andre]

I agree on the plants I will change them before I put them on my portfolio list :D

[Staszek]

Very nice project - render is greate

[slangford]

Great work man... One thing I would change is the furniture. I have to model alot of custom furniture at work...and one thing my boss looks for is the cushions need to be relaxed and soft. Your cushions look very rigid.... That would help alot..

[Andre]

Thnx for the comments.

@Slangford. I totaly agree on the furniture. I modelled them myself but didn't have time to make them better I will for the image I want to put in my portfolio tough.

grtz,

André

[pixel9]

Hey, great work on modeling, texturing and lighting. As Seralios mentioned, your lighting might need a slightly improvement, but it fits the needs of this scene :thumbsup:

groeten uit duitsland ;)

toby

[digitalputty]

Nice looking render! :D

A few things caught my eye:

* Texture stretching on the legs of the table.
* The fridge seems to be a bit too big? Perhaps it is the angle of the camera? Or it is suppose to be a HUGE fridge! :D
* The cushions do seem rather ridged (already mentioned)
* The wood floor - where the slats meet ... it seems a bit too deep.
* On the wood floor as well the slats line up a bit too much (lower left corner example). This makes it look a bit artificial - houses Ive been in dont line floors like that (that I have seen).
* Not a biggie but ... the handles on the fridge look like they would be awkward to use? 0_o ... not a biggie tho. :P

I love the lighting. However, there aren't any lamps or recessed lighting in the ceiling ... it will get mighty dark in there at night. ;)

This makes me wanna model. :D

[jkuy]

Good crits above! This pic is really quite amazing for 1 day to create! ANd that within itself is impressive! keep it up! later

[JO-animator]

very nice Rendring.
3 Stars.

[Andre]

Thnx everybody for your reply's

@digitalputty: Thanks for your great comments. I will take them with me when I am going to finish this picture for my portfolio.

grtz,

Andre

[wasriyah]

wow super realistisch!

[xervia]

again i am blown away!please share some of your light settings!pleaseeeeee!!

[andyspence]

Nice render Andre! What sort of lighting set up have you got with this seen. I love the balance of light in the room ;-)

-Quad.

(V-Ray newbie)

[Andre]

Thanks everybody It realy warms my hart to get this response on my work. it realy motivates me to make even better picture haha.. Here are the lightning settings I used for this piece nothing special I think :D

http://members.home.nl/a.ferwerda/ligthssetup1.jpg

http://members.home.nl/a.ferwerda/ligthssetup2.jpg

http://members.home.nl/a.ferwerda/renderinstellingen.jpg

I hope you guys can use them.

grtz,

André

[LukaStellwag]

Thank you so much for the screenshots... nice rendering!

[roctavian]

I like it mate. With all the minor problems and for only one day working with a tight deadline I think is really good. Btw, nice portofolio.

[Andre]

Thank you m8s!

[valeoart]

Wow! The render settings are realy helpfull. How many time do you spend for render? Great visualisation work!:thumbsup:

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