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Eyesight
05-10-2006, 11:37 AM
Hi,
I tried to make a band of jazz completely made from piece of metal.
C & C are welcome

http://membres.lycos.fr/etiennefraisse/wip/jazz_band.jpg

3dsensei
05-10-2006, 03:39 PM
Hahaha, Thats so COOL!!
I like the colors and Lighting, there's a really nice mood in it.
And I love the Idéa.

I just think that the sax player, and drum player
needs to be moved a little away from each other, or something like that,
the sax player blends in to much, he needs to stand out a little more.
Also i think the sax players back foot needs to touch the ground.
And the drum players right arm is in a to straight line with the drum stick.

Anyway it's awesome.

Eyesight
05-10-2006, 09:19 PM
Thanks for all your comments "3dsensei" , i think you're right.... i will make some modifications...

vimmel
05-10-2006, 09:29 PM
Thats a truely awesome idea! I like the render very much.

As 3dsensei said; the sax player isn't touching the ground, he's levitating :) And maybe they should have some more space between each other, the drum player and the sax player.

Just a little idea: maybe there should be a logo of some sort on the bass drum, in like brushed steel or someting in the middle.

Otherwise this is great I think! Keep it up! I'll follow this thread :)

Sarford
05-11-2006, 12:19 AM
Very funny idear, I like it a lot :)

Maybe you should change the drumset to be more like the base? You know, see through. Right now the basedrum is way too reflective.

nice one

Lamster
05-11-2006, 03:43 PM
Jolly Good Stuff!

Terence

sitnikvladimir
05-11-2006, 03:47 PM
Nice but change a enviroment scene! :buttrock:

Eyesight
05-12-2006, 08:05 AM
Thanks for all your comments,
I made some modification on dummer , materials

http://membres.lycos.fr/etiennefraisse/wip/jazz_band2.jpg

Eyesight
05-15-2006, 08:01 AM
I made some light and material modifications... hope you like

http://membres.lycos.fr/etiennefraisse/wip/jazz_band3.jpg

ts-falcon
05-15-2006, 05:48 PM
wow that is very neat, at 1st glance i thought it was a digital pic of sculpture or something, only after looking harder i could see it was cg. very cool concept....itd be neat to make this in real life as well :D

Eyesight
05-17-2006, 08:21 PM
I think of having finish my scene. I think that I must add something to complete it, but I do not know what!

http://membres.lycos.fr/etiennefraisse/wip/jazz_band4.jpg

Eyesight
05-30-2006, 12:40 PM
I have made some modification , i replace the wood texture by a glass texture..... hope you like

http://membres.lycos.fr/etiennefraisse/wip/jazz_band_glass.jpg

lotaH
05-30-2006, 12:47 PM
I have made some modification , i replace the wood texture by a glass texture..... hope you like



He you is very good, but it could be more real if we saw the points of it welds...

But, in any way, it was very good...

Congratulations

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Wardile
05-30-2006, 12:50 PM
I liked the wood more. Maybe put them on a photo of yer room on the table er something?

Sarford
05-30-2006, 09:23 PM
Hmm. I like the glass buut also the wood. If I see the picture with the glass I start to wonder how the puppets are connected to the surface and it seems they are not. With the wood floor you don't have this problem.

Anyhow great image, I don't think there is much you can do to make this even better.

Great stuff.

ps: very nice surfacing too! top notch!

andybuck
05-31-2006, 12:58 AM
dont usualy post comments but i just had to on this one, brilliant model and render, i like teh glass more.

look forward to seeing more from you,

regards

andybuck

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