Character : <--- DEMON --->

[azazel]

nothing to crit so far, i like him :thumbsup: :applause:

[Troub]

very nice, like it a lot :buttrock:

would be nice to see a wirframe, is it LW?

[Joebount]

Thanks for the nice comments ! :)

here is an updated version, proportion revised and no more horns on the sides. I also aded some fols in the neck and added some ram horns (not finished).

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo06.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo07.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo08.jpg

C&C are as usual welcome !

[CJ]

Lookin pretty cool there :)
I like the ram type horns better personally.... though the last turn of the horns it is a bit too sharp of an angle I think. Keep it up :)

[squeezestudio]

He looks great!

[BiTMAP]

put his chin horns back, and make his "ram" horns flat, and then you got your self one BADASS demon... Pun intended.

[Martyr]

Non mais c'Est tu le fun de modeler des demons...: )

He looks great, Jb continue your good work and give him a body : )

[l_farley13_l]

Hey looks good. His eyelids might need a bit more detail, they look like sockets rather than folds of skin around the eyes.

Also maybe a bit stronger nose and brow for more masculine power . . . heheh.

Looking forward to the rest!

Farley13

[sorry for the lack of spellcheck!]

[visualboo]

Nice job so far Joe. I want a big mean body on this guy. hehe or maybe a small shriveled up skinny body for laughs. Could be funny.

Take care bud.

[Joebount]

Thanks for the comments guys !
farley : ok sir, no problem sir, it's done sir ! :p
Visualboo : I think I'll go for a big musculous body (how original ! well, I'll make some tries later)
Martyyr : je sais, je sais ;) Faudrait que l'on bosse sur une pochette de métal comme prévu un de ces quatre matins ! :)
BiTMAP : I don't think I'll put back the chins horns and to flatten the actual ones, I dunno... I'll give it a try and see if it works.

Update !!!

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo09.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo10.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo11.jpg

[Spliff_Richards]

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[diazgl]

he's a nicely modeled demon, only that he extremely reminds me of Horny from that game, em, from Bullfrog? Dungeon Keeper i think. His face analogies are extremely similar. I like the look, only it looks like a crossmix between something that could be described as cartoon, and a human model.

[leigh]

Originally posted by Spliff_Richards
I think he looks a bit jewish with those horns.

Spliff_Richards, if that is a racially biased remark, kindly refrain from making such comments in the future. Racism is not tolerated on these forums.

Thank you.

Leigh

[Laa-Yosh]

You should pull in the corners of the mouth a bit, to form those little identations there. Try to check reference photos of real people to see what you should aim for. Also, the lower lip could be a bit more fuller and smoother.

Tthe nose could use some tweaking as well, it doesn't fit the character and the nostrils aren't defined enough. And I'd make the brow/forehead area stronger, so that he could ram anything with his head :)

[DaliFan]

"I think he looks a bit jewish with those horns"

Hail hitler eh? Despite that thread where you bashed Americans maybe you can get off the political uneducated soapbox now?




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very nice job, love the detail and modeling overall... if he was coming at me.. I would run :beer:

[coCoKNIght]

Oh, c'mon, this thread is not 'bout that.
Your model is looking very good, I like both horn tipes, maybe it depends on what the body will look like. I was impressed on how easily? you could just give him completely different horns :)
Keep posting :thumbsup:

[Joebount]

Thx for the comments and suggestion (I'll try to retouch the lips tommorow, don't have time today because I have an interview for a job (wish me luck :) ).

PS : I don't like racist posts. Could an admin remove it please, thanks.

Here is an update :

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo12.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo13.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo14.jpg

[derelict]

i like it from the front. but the side the horn looks mellowed. maybe make it broader from the side view (horns)? So in short it is more oblong (oval) than roundish horns.

Oh one word... fantastic!

[Maximus Groff]

Man... horns like that go from the head and down to the front - not the back... or will get like "princess Star Wars" hair do.

;) I know its hard - but check from ref on the aries sign.


Keep up!

[Taoizm]

Joe, this guy is looking great. if you keep curling his horns though he's going to look like he stole princess Leia's hairbuns. :)

D'oh I repeated Maximus Groff's same comment....

more updates!! wheee!!!:bounce:

[leigh]

That's a really nice model, Joebount :thumbsup:

[CJ]

Good job man, the horns looking much better! :thumbsup:

[satanatron]

looking really good so far..........

ps: I don't think the comment was meant to be racist...he was probably just pertaining to the fact that the horns curly nature reminded him of the way some jewish people wear their hair..

can't wait to see the rest of the model.......

[Joebount]

:beer: thx guys, my goal was to do a version of Leia in a demonic style ... band of Bastards ! :p

Quick update, I'll try other designs for the horns this afternoon :

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo15.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo16.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo17.jpg

[Joebount]

UPDATE :)
slimer, new horns, not happy at all ;) thanks too all the people who gave me advice, it's comming, it's comming !

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo18.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo19.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo20.jpg

[Solesurvivor]

wow, very nice, but isn't the chin a bit too small know, i liked it when it was large like Jay leno ;)

[Joebount]

Thx ! :)

I updated many things, like the horns, the ears, etc. Now begin the fun : detailing !:D

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo21.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo22.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo23.jpg

[lazorwolf]

did you just get finished watching "the cell?" ;)

awesome model.

[Martyr]

the horns are better like this its more demonic-like

[BiTMAP]

but i do think that those chin horns were absolutly original looking and should stay! arggh I'm an evil ... nevermind useless..

[Joebount]

Bump !

Thx for the comments !

I didn't touch the head, just began to create the body, here is a shoot :

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo24.jpg

[Joebount]

Bump, cf first page or that :

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo26.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo27.jpg

[Hellwolve]

First of all, it looks great!

:bowdown: :thumbsup: :applause:

Second, what have you planned for the legs? May I suggest classical goat legs?

[shaddix]

its amazing Joebount

iam a little bit subjectiv because i simply love demons. but dont mind.

i would love to see some half wasted wings, or big majestic wings. :D

[shaddix]

i think i saw a little glitch on the last frontal picture of your model

the upper arm is a little to short and it looks like the upper arm is coming out from the inside of the shoulder.

[Joebount]

Thx guys for the comments, it has been a while !
You were right for the proportions and now, the updated version got proportions troubles around the pelvis area (too big on the vertical scale, I'll fix that this week ! ).

I don't plan to give him goat legs, well not at the moment. My pic is really well defined in my mind, you will see ! :)

here is the updated version : http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo28.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo29.jpg

[DDrake]

Hey, greeeat model there! Keep updates coming!

Some suggestions :D

Arms seems a bit short, but it is hard to tell without the legs for reference.

Do not put his arms on 90º. Instead, use 45º because it will save you a lot of suffering when you skin/rig him.

If you are planning some kind of facial animation, make his face more neutral so you can give him that expression with bones. Hope that has sense :D

I think that the hip should be a bit big, but as before, without the legs is hard to tell.

Hope to see this one skinned!!

[Joebount]

Thx for the comments DDrake, really helpful !

here is an update :

http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo32.jpg
http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo33.jpg

[Hellwolve]

The further you develop it, the more I'm curious about the legs ;)

Please don't tell me they are going to be normal :surprised

[Remi]

Nice job Joe....really making some progress....personally i liked the bigger jaw myself...more stylized i thought...great job anyhue....take er easy...:thumbsup:

[CJ]

I think the legs could go any way. "Normal" as in biped or some bizarre centaur lower half even.
One lil crit though is the.... uhh quads? I think is the name of the muscle heh the part of it right above the knee... looks like it bulges out a bit too much, making his knees look too thin or weak. I think that makes sense.

Just a thought. :shrug: :)

[Gkaine]

lookn good

[Thelios]

arms and the hands look really good great job on them, like his face too, just not as much:beer: :beer: :beer: :thumbsup:

[Joebount]

Thx !!!

I have been really busy

Here is a texturing work (just a beginning). Thx to all the people who gave me advice, I'll try to do my best to don't disapoint you !



http://joebount.free.fr/book/diablo_text_16.jpg

[Martyr]

Hi, for now the textures seem to be great continue that way...
i particulary like the mouth part.

i wanna talk about modelling I think that his ears are too short it would be better if these ears goes behing the horns its only an opinion:buttrock:

[Fetus23]

hey joe! Great job with the demon so far...I think textures will really bring him to life. Have you got plans for a costume of any kind?

:beer:

[Joebount]

Thanks Martin. I like his ears that way Martin ;) I don't want to give him a bigger demonical aspect.

Thanks fetus ! I've got a precise picture in my mind for a long time now, but I can't say anything at teh moment I'll try to advance my work to the maximum next week.

Here is an update, thanks to all the people who helped me !

http://joebount.free.fr/book/WIP/diablo_text_21.jpg

[Joebount]

bump bump bump

[visualboo]

Nice work Joe. Your modeling skills are really getting nice.

2 pennies from me: The creases on his upper lip are a bit too hard imo

[Hellwolve]

It's a matter of taste, but I think the transistion between the horns and his head is too smooth.

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