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MissOptimist
05-09-2006, 01:11 AM
Hey guys.
Please check out this logo animation I made for my demo reel.
Be honest and let me know what you think. All critics are welcome. The animation is pretty short, I've compressed it to 1.40 MB. You can download the animation here:

http://s52.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1G7F80DOLRJIA3NIM1RK3IP09W (http://www.edelivery.com/download.php?id=7Ziud4bY7Anuw36d9ER6)

MauricioArias
05-09-2006, 02:26 AM
Hey guys.
Please check out this logo animation I made for my demo reel.
Be honest and let me know what you think. All critics are welcome. The animation is pretty short, I've compressed it to 1.40 MB. You can download the animation here:

http://www.edelivery.com/download.php?id=7Ziud4bY7Anuw36d9ER6 (http://www.edelivery.com/download.php?id=7Ziud4bY7Anuw36d9ER6)

not bad start!.....
movement/ squash and stretch you can exagerate more!~
but over all pretty good!

MissOptimist
05-09-2006, 02:20 PM
movement/ squash and stretch you can exagerate more!

Will do. Thanks for the advice. :)

Velk
05-09-2006, 02:37 PM
Really depends on you creative brief. But here are the things that really chap me.

1. Kern your text! Just do it, it will look SO much better.
2. Ditch the overblown Bevel effect, the highlights look cheesy and fake.
3. Consider using a different font for the red 'e' to give it some additional style.

Thats it for the freebies ;)

MissOptimist
05-09-2006, 02:47 PM
3. Consider using a different font for the red 'e' to give it some additional style.

What do you mean by the "red 'e'"? :shrug:

Velk
05-09-2006, 03:05 PM
Looks like I was looking at the wrong thing... I was looking at the eDelivery logo at the top of the page; missed the text that reads "File download for 5 times. It can't be downloaded anymore".

My apologies, post the logo somewhere else and I'll take a look at it.

MissOptimist
05-09-2006, 03:17 PM
oh ok. LOL. You were talking about the "edelivery." :D

Wow, it's been downloaded 5 times? 5 downloads with only one advice?

Velk I'll be posting it up again, it's going to take about 10 minutes to upload it because I have a slow 56k modem.

MissOptimist
05-09-2006, 03:30 PM
Here is the new link:
http://s52.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1G7F80DOLRJIA3NIM1RK3IP09W

Wilson-3d
05-10-2006, 02:54 PM
Hello. You know to be perfecly honest I would consider this your first try and do another. What relavence is the heart? Is it a heart? Is it dancing of scared? Make your intro short and sweet. I would suggest making a nice 2d design or much simpler 3d with your name and info on it and the title of the position you are going to be applying for. 3d Generlist, Animator, modeler or whatever. Just some ideas. Good luck!

MissOptimist
05-10-2006, 07:17 PM
Hello. You know to be perfecly honest I would consider this your first try and do another. What relavence is the heart? Is it a heart? Is it dancing of scared? Make your intro short and sweet. I would suggest making a nice 2d design or much simpler 3d with your name and info on it and the title of the position you are going to be applying for. 3d Generlist, Animator, modeler or whatever. Just some ideas. Good luck!

Well my name is Corazon and Corazon stands for heart in Spanish. I was trying to make it look like something is trying to come out of the heart. I can't just make some kind of design, I have to animate it. You know how the Pixar logo goes the one with the lamp? I want to do something a bit similar to that.

Wilson-3d
05-10-2006, 08:32 PM
I was wondering if Corzon stood for or ment heart and I just did not realize it. Perhaps using a lattice derformer will help you along the way. Best of luck finishing it off!

MissOptimist
05-12-2006, 08:43 PM
Thanks for the advise.:)

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