PDA

View Full Version : Hourglass , Fabio Joao Zimmer (3D)

F481O
05-06-2006, 04:01 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/184928/184928_1146931301_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/184928/184928_1146931301_large.jpg)

Title: Hourglass
Name: Fabio Joao Zimmer
Country: Brazil
Software: Blender

this is a "remake" at one of first images that I made.. modeled and textured made with Blender... render in Yafray

C&C are wellcome!

^.-
juancuadra
05-07-2006, 03:20 AM
hey fabio, i like your concept, here a few ideas to improve it:

1. Do not place the hourglass in the center.... it creates a center composition...
2. Desaturate some of your colors, especially the green
3. Try and create softer shadows and highlights, there is a lot of grain in your image, in other words, it's a bit too sharp

Hope this helps!
F481O
05-07-2006, 04:59 PM
tank's!!

I'll see wath I can do..
:)
KaaZoo
05-07-2006, 07:54 PM
hi

i like it but i see the glass is strange ( clean ) for this old environment

nice ^_^
CGTalk Moderation
05-07-2006, 07:55 PM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.