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claycw

03-09-2002, 08:21 PM

This is my first model and is based off the artwork of Mike James from jamesart.com I know she's way over the top and that real women don't really look like this so don't bust my balls over it.
I would like some input on what you feel I should change or adjust as far as the overall feel of the character.

you can find the pics here
http://home.mmcable.com/t3rs/model1.htm

Thanks

jbradford

03-09-2002, 08:33 PM

her waistline is too thin, and her arms need to be rounded more. the kneecaps need some more work.

claycw

03-09-2002, 10:11 PM

First off thanks for the reply
second her waist is supposed to be too thin, shes based off a cartoon.
but I do have to agree on the arms and kneecaps though.
I appreciate your comments.

Clay

Ivars

03-09-2002, 10:24 PM

even for a cartoon I think her waist is too thin. It looks pretty weird, and there would be no place for her ribs.
Good start though, keep on it.

claycw

03-10-2002, 01:06 AM

Sorry about the link my server went down for a little while it's fixed now.

3dsmax

03-10-2002, 01:16 AM

It's true her waist is too thin. At the same time, she is also a cartoon character. I'd say trust your instinct and do what you want as originally intended for her.

claycw

03-10-2002, 02:02 AM

Made some minor adjustments from your comments.

http://home.mmcable.com/t3rs/images/Front1.jpg
http://home.mmcable.com/t3rs/images/angle1.jpg
http://home.mmcable.com/t3rs/images/back1.jpg
http://home.mmcable.com/t3rs/images/back1a.jpg

let me know what you think.

and again thanks for all your comments

BASSit

03-10-2002, 02:06 AM

Looking much better now ! Finish hands, legs and a head and let us have a look again...
Keep us updated.

paku

03-10-2002, 02:17 AM

I think her breasts are way to big but hey if thats what yer lookin for ^_^ She gonna have back problems tho!

3dflasher

03-10-2002, 01:59 PM

I think her boobs are too small....:p :D Them bad boys can never be to big. With a rack like that :eek: she is gonna have back problems for a different reason than carrying them around ;) :wip:

claycw - Very nice start....I really like how her feet look with the heels on. The front part of her shoulder is a little flat right now. Maybe define that. Also dont forget her collar bone.

Them suckas are like a 38dddd's....Only in the poly world :D
Reminds me of Jessica Rabbit....She had a crazy thin waist too.
I like it!

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