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intrikit
05-03-2006, 08:05 AM
http://members.shaw.ca/session/punkSMALL.jpg

i tried to post this on the finished gallery but it was turned down.
other than a few errors, i don't know why it can't be considered as finished or at least almost finished. so i need some opinions on how to get this up to par. what am i missing that prevents it from being incomplete?? thanks!!

pap87
05-03-2006, 10:12 AM
Doesn't look unfinished to me. But, i reckon it's the writing. I think it's unnecessary. The rest is good.

intrikit
05-03-2006, 08:58 PM
hey thanks for the reply!

however, i need more crits and comments please!

aldog
05-03-2006, 09:02 PM
I like it alot, perhaps it's a bit sketchy looking though.
Like if you blended together the colors a bit, like the white on the pants, and his knife could be smoothed out some. and the background too. Right now it's got a bit of a grungy look that looks good, but maybe if it was all smoothed over a bit and like the background was a grungy background it would pull it together a bit more.

intrikit
05-05-2006, 09:46 AM
need more comments please!!

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