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DeathNinja
05-03-2006, 04:43 AM
Hi All! This is a little dude I am working on in my spare time. I have got about a week and a half of actual work into it including the concept. I plan on a doing a Lo-poly version (around 10,000trys) with a normal map, Defuse, and a spec. If all go's well I will try and get an animation for hem as well. Please tell me what you think weather its good/ bad or even "unconstructive".
I am using MAX 7, Z Brush, and Photoshop.
LOOM
05-03-2006, 04:52 AM
looks very nice ,
The only thing i see that seems a bit off - is maybe the width of his ankles.
they look a little skinny (just a little) compared to the rest of his body.
Roja
05-03-2006, 12:13 PM
I think he looks pretty good! I do agree that the ankles look too thin however,
ts-falcon
05-04-2006, 02:48 AM
very cool, love the concept art, the highpoly is lookin good too. his face looks a little weird to me but i guess its still a wip, good work :D
Havoc89
05-04-2006, 02:52 AM
Looks pretty cool. My only critic is the chin. It looks like it is pushed inwards. Other than that, nice work.
DeathNinja
05-05-2006, 02:28 AM
Loom, and Roja: Now that you mention it the ankles are a little thin and I think I will fatten them up a little.

TS_Falcon, and Havoc 89: Yea the head was dun rather quick to get it fleshed out. But I intend to hit it hard on the my next pass.

Thank you all for you feed back I really appreciate it.
DeathNinja
05-06-2006, 04:26 AM
Minor update on the head. The teath are temporary. The pose of the face "I hope" will make it easer to get a normal map from and to animate.
TheShow
05-08-2006, 05:48 PM
I think that is an improvement on the chin from the first version - it looks much stronger than the original. It's a nice lloking model, I am most attracted to the body details and armor. They have a nice shape and weight to them, good work.
TychoCelchuuu
05-08-2006, 09:00 PM
Looks real nice. His pants need work though; the "wrinkles" are more like gigantic bulges. I would add more of them, and make them smaller and less pronounced.
kenwtoney
05-09-2006, 05:25 AM
Nice detailing. I especially like the gun!
DeathNinja
09-11-2006, 09:00 PM
I have a few updates! I completely re-did the head (I wanted to work with patches and make a easily reusable head for this and future projects because the others were not working), I played with the colors a bit but have not laid any textures on it yet, and I am reworking the pants.
As always feedback is appreciated and what I live for! :)
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