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ErikSvensson
05-02-2006, 03:56 PM
Howdy folks.

I started this male head last night (about 4 hours totally spent on it) I'd love to have some feedback on all of it, I find critism more valuable rather than "looks good" or "looks bad", then tell me, what looks good / bad? :) It helps more. I'll try to texture it later on too and make some accessories for him and render it as some kind of portrait, not sure yet, probably modelling reel material too. It keeps me more motivated to continue on it if I have a thread like this on CGtalk, too. I hope.

It's modelled in silo, which I do love, have only used it for about 1½ week but it's a great tool. (and i tried way to many programs, 3Ds max, Maya, Milkshape, 3D canvas and some more) so, try it if you like modelling :-)

http://www.eriks3d.com/malesmooth.jpghttp://www.eriks3d.com/malesmooth.jpg
http://www.eriks3d.com/malesmooth.jpg
http://www.eriks3d.com/malewire.jpghttp://www.eriks3d.com/Malesmooth.jpg

http://www.eriks3d.com/malewire.jpghttp://www.eriks3d.com/Malewire.jpg
http://www.eriks3d.com/malewire.jpg

http://www.eriks3d.com/malewire.jpg



cheers!

Erik
ErikSvensson
05-02-2006, 09:50 PM
Ok. That one above is veeery outdated now. Here is the new more improved one. about 10 h of work totally.

http://www.eriks3d.com/theman.jpg

Erik
Matti3D
05-02-2006, 10:10 PM
hey warbird looks good;) But if you want some constructive crits so:
1. I think his lips could be bigger
2.there`s also smoething wrong with the area near the forehead (it`s difficult to say from this view)
3.Maybe his chin could be smaller

but it looks really good i think. just few more tweaks and it`ll look great
keep it up
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